I love fire emblem oh and nice story

It's good but it's lacking in detail. If you add more detail it could be the perfect daml story.

Good story but aren't you gonna complete it?waiting

my god this seiries so far that i have read is amazing vary good work

Wow! You do make great stories! I'd love to read more stories like these from you...

When are you uploading then next chapter?

what the you already know what the nextchapter is why not do it?

I looovve your story so far! Hope you update soon!:)

Another great chapter. But this time there is a spelling error. I'm sorry. I don't know why, but I just correct people a lot. But please continue writing great chapters to this story.

We saw some grammar problems. It was interesting. But you make Drew sound like a stalker.

Well as someknow i love,love, love pokonemon and have watched most of all the epasods and have watched all the moves. So i say it was a grade A chapter can't wait for the next one My is on one line so i would go back and change it to May.

:D great story!

hey, i really like your story.
it's good
but... don't you think it was a bit of a rush when u made drew confess to may right at the beginning?
but i really like the base of your story though! :)

that was an amazing short story when are you going to write more!

I hope May wins