I love it! Took me a while to remember who Hptaru was but then it clicked. I love this story!

they are so cute togeter. its maccys falt that dem isent with him

This was a great fic. I think it calls for a sequal though. :)

Well, except for Jemima being Demeter's daughter, I think it's pretty darn good so far! Hope to see this story continued, not just left unfinished...if it is, I may take matters into my own hands and finish it.

YAY! Demi & Munku! WOOOOO! _ Great fic! Make a sequel! .

Wh-what? The end! (chanting) Sequal! Sequal!

Love it please write more. Or even a sequel

sooooooooo sad! This can't be the end! Is it?

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*howls and sobs* IT'S NOT FAIR! EVERY TIME! You think they'll be together forever, but nooooo, they just have to break up! WHY ME? *is dragged away still sobbing and screaming by the toms in white* IT'S NOT FAIR! But I do still like the story . . . :)

The Insane One

Hey I love ur fic!

I like how you interpreted Dem and Mac's relationship! COOL!

Keep up the good work dudette!

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Awwwwwww! Mac and Demi! More, please!

AHHHHHHHHH! CLIFF ! *breaks the nearest door in half, then feels better* :) PLEASE WRITE MORE! I luv Mac&Dem fics!

Ohmygosh! I thought I'd reviewed this! Oi! I LUV this story! It's on my favorite list! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON! PLEASE! I love this! :) I'm a Macavity luver myself so , , , PLEASE! *gives puppy, er, kitten eyes* (O).(O) PWEASE!

A completely different side of Macavity is shown, a kinder, gentler side. Well done. I'll be looking forward to the rest. One thing: I thought Firefrorfiddle was just a character in one of the plays Gus starred in. Was he real?