This was such a beautiful story, their emotions you deceived felt so raw and genuine. You do have a way with words and manage to use them so beautifully! And I love your VinTi stories!

So beautiful. I don't think at the time I read this so many years ago it was finished i'm so happy I got to finish it now though :). I think Vincent's eyes were blue too. I swear in one of his young Vincent photos they were blue.

This story was very mesmerizing. I know Vincent and Tifa didn't have a lot of verbal conversations but it worked so well. It really fit them.

This story was probably one of the best i've read in a while. Thank you :)

This is so beautiful. This was published in 05 and I think that was the first time I read this. I was around 15 or 16 and thought this first chapter was so amazing. I also discovered Metric because of this. It was so captivating :) very wonderful. I don't remember if I read more to the story it's been years :) But it will be a joy re reading it

Just two pairs of words...heart breaking/beautifully written.

This story. Breathless. Melancholic. Amazing. I absolutely fell in love with it. It was imperfectly perfect, or maybe the other way around, with how the two acted with each other. Ah, it makes me happy. While I read, I really did feel time slow and I willingly sunk into the story. Ah, I am happy with how it ended. Thank you for writing something so moving.

love it

I once read a Shakespeare's sonnet that ran like this:

My mistress' eyes are nothing like the sun;

Coral is far more red than her lips' red;

If snow be white, why then her breasts are dun;

If hairs be wires, black wires grow on her head.

I have seen roses damask'd, red and white,

But no such roses see I in her cheeks;

I love to hear her speak, yet well I know

That music hath a far more pleasing sound;

I grant I never saw a goddess go;

My mistress, when she walks, treads on the ground:

And yet, by heaven, I think my love as rare

As any she belied with false compare.

I think I like it for the same reason I like this story.

This entire fic was awesome. The early chapters really pulled at my heartstrings, you can really feel the emptiness, the unsureness adn insecurity. Marvelous work, and I really liek the way you wove the story.

Aww! This is really cute. I am glad it has a happy ending and I commend you for how you portrayed Tifa. I thought the epilogue would have been written in Vincent's perspective (firs voice. You started it) but I guess it moved to third person at the end. Still, I enjoyed it. Good job.

Poetic, and so very in-character and I were to sum up your entire story, it would be a description of a moment in which time has stopped. It floats between seconds and minutes and hours without ever really feeling them. It's unusual and I quite like it. Picked up a couple of typos though.

I loved it, though call me a daram person I liked the saddness in it more than the happy ending. Still all in all I love it.

Cripes, I can't believe I never read this until now; you did an amazing job with this one.

'I loved it" would be such a trivial thing to say...It was a brilliant piece of work.

aw!

This piece was poetry more than anything, and what fine poetry. Your writing makes the atmosphere and emotions of the two tangible and real. Fantastic.