| Reviews for Be Careful What Mutts Wish For |
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BadListener chapter 7 . 8/9/2013 I have a feeling the Seto is going to get scolded by Joey when he gets beck to their camp sight -_-' |
Guest chapter 7 . 5/13/2013 I love it!I love it!I love it!I love it!I love it!I love it!I love it!I love it!I love it!I love it!I love it!I love it!I love it!I love it!I love it!I love it!I love it!I love it! |
Andrea chapter 7 . 5/17/2012 I absolutely can not wait for the next chapter. I am in love with this story. Please keep it up! *hugs* |
dancing elf chapter 7 . 6/9/2011 very entertaining |
Asj Johnson chapter 7 . 8/31/2010 it's been an interesting story. I'll wait and see if you ever come back to it. _ By the way, the end of this chapter made me wonder if someone else had a birthday recently and that butterfly was the result. O_o |
dragonwitch250 chapter 7 . 7/5/2010 Great story. I wonder if Kaiba will ever get back to normal. Can't wait to read more! |
Pinfeathers chapter 7 . 12/19/2008 Aw, this is so precious! Though I must say, I always think of Seto as a black kitten when I compare him to a cat... Not of course that it makes any difference what so ever... XD |
girlytyphoon1 chapter 7 . 7/31/2008 I'm wondering how Seto's going to react once he finds out his current state was Joey's doing. :D This is very good. I hope you continue with it! I want to see what happens next. :) |
zealousshadow chapter 7 . 3/2/2008 I thought of something else...burrs? Very typical forest thing to happen to animals. Hope you are not offended by my suggestions. When I write, I like a little encouragement now and then. And an amazing writer like you deserves a lot of comments! |
zealousshadow chapter 7 . 3/2/2008 This is an absolutely fantastic story. I love everything about it, even the little conversations with Seto at the beginnings. You do especially well with Joey's accent. The key to accents is not misspelling all the words, but just certain words to give it an added flavor, a talent you excel at! Good description of wilderness animals as well. I lived in a hundred acre woods for six years-and though I've never come face to face with a mountain lion, lynx's behave similarly, and butterflies really can act like they're out to get you :) I like how Seto's one weakness is petting, and stroking behind the ears. Very clever! Let us hope he does not actually get fleas, or his new 'owner' might decide he needs a bath. No WAY would Seto put up with that! (But if you want to try it, by all means.) I did think Yuggi often looked uncommonly like a mouse. So you have two cats of your own? No wonder you can write of cats so well. What kind and color are they? I've had three-and one had a Siamese mother so did he ever have a talkative voice! Though nothing rivals Seto's I'm sure. Pretty please write a bit more? With a cherry on top? |
Mersedes chapter 7 . 12/16/2007 OMGosh, UPDATE SOON. I'M IN LOVE WITH YOUR STORY! Ok, well, that's over. I really enjoy the snippets of action you put in your fic (like the snake encounter-it really keeps the story moving). I also liked how Joey found out Kaiba was his cat-that was hilarious. And with beer cans, nonetheless. I also found it adorable how Seto acted cute with Serenity, just to annoy Joey. But it was totally adorable when Seto "battled" with the butterfly. My favorite part of your fic was where Seto saves Joey, though, hands down. That was totally sweet. Your descriptions are great. And all the characters are completely in canon, especially Seto. I love the story-line, the character interactions, and Seto's reactions to becoming a cat. That he killed the water bottle was another really funny detail. I also liked that Joey and Seto get along better-I first noticed this when Joey laughs when Seto destroys the water bottle. That was a good touch. Anyways, I'll stop rambling now! Great job, and keep writing! Update when you can, please! I can't wait to keep reading! |
psychedelia chapter 7 . 12/11/2007 -laffs at Seto for a very long time- Plz update soon! |
kikioblack chapter 7 . 11/22/2007 Yay, an update! That's interesting, saved by a butterfly. |
Dela chapter 7 . 11/20/2007 finally i was waiting for the update .nice chapter |
WatchingYou chapter 7 . 11/20/2007 Great story! Really funny :) |