| Reviews for The Return of the Saviour |
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Guest chapter 17 . 3/27 Thank you for the wonderful story. |
Jestersky98 chapter 11 . 10/16/2019 He can make anything happen with magic, why not make a spell that kills all his soul pieces including him which also is unshieldable? Problem solved This format of magic you got for mc is so strong that this entire story is retarded if you’re forcing the plot more than harry having fun, fucking around and one shotting lv |
Jestersky98 chapter 17 . 10/15/2019 Honestly can’t call this story anything other than wish fullfilment trash This Harry is insanely op and considering his powers should simply be able to concentrate and kill lv inside hogwarts while sleeping yet you’re forcing such drama and stupidity that it unreadable |
Jestersky98 chapter 6 . 10/15/2019 Why do you potray him as powerful when he hasn’t been able to do shit except play arpund with snape Not a single thing except perhaps teleporting inside hogwarts has been impressive and frankly he’s been worse than canon |
ArthurShade chapter 17 . 3/12/2019 Fantastic story |
heliosoursungod chapter 17 . 1/2/2019 Thank you for this story, I enjoyed it very much. I like Harry and Luna stories very much. I did miss having Dobby in the story (I know he would have been dead in cannon, but Albus the manipulator was still around) |
BountifulGames chapter 2 . 5/5/2018 So did Harry like try to perform human transmutation or something? |
Guest chapter 1 . 5/24/2017 Good |
paz chapter 17 . 12/27/2016 Marvelous |
Debbie chapter 17 . 6/27/2016 Enjoyed it a lot. I only read completed stories because I am not good at waiting. Like it a lot. |
auto-generated username chapter 2 . 11/9/2015 Your description of the essence of magic is similar to the Hindu concept of Brahman. Not bringing religion into this, just asking if that was intentional. |
Guest chapter 14 . 11/7/2015 If you don't get the hospital joke... what else takes nine moths? Heehee... Dirty joke... Great chapter! But Luna feels a bit OOC to me, and it makes me feel like I am reading a Harry/OC fic not a Harry/Luna fic, though you are getting better at getting down luna's personality. |
Guest chapter 13 . 11/6/2015 Did you update at the hospital *wink wink troll face* |
Guest chapter 9 . 11/6/2015 Didn't Snape (R.I.P) make the wolf'sbane potion? |
Guest chapter 6 . 11/6/2015 Y-you... YOU KILLED HEDWIG! WHAT THE HELL! WHY DID YOU DO THAT! |