Aw, this is a sweet story. Castor and Pollux were one of my favorite Greek myths. I heard the version that they both were carried to the stars and made into the Gemini constellation, but I like the other one too.

Great job on it.

Aw. I love Castor and Pollux, they just - agh. Boys! It's so sweet.

This is really lovely too. I particularly liked the part about Pollux's denial and making the sacrifice of the bull - I saw it as an action depicting his anger and passion. The only thing I'll say was a negative is the rather abrupt ending - it ended too quickly; I also think the beginning was an awkward time (it should have perhaps been a little farther back in time?). Otherwise, loved it. :)

Lovely, lovely piece. I just love takes on Greek mythology.

0 Aw that was so kyute, and so sad ... I'd say bittersweet. I LOVE Greek Mythology. But I never thought of writing a fanfic about it; interesting idea... and I liked this story. Short, simple, original, and so so sweet!

This was beautyful, I really got a lump in my througth. Only thing - it's quite short, I think you could evolve it a bit more around C & P's deep friendships, perhaps as memory-flashbacks of P when C's pyre is burning.