omg you LIE! this story is so good, why did you stop? i swar its one of the few good furuba fanfics out there. PLZ UPDATE, even tho it seems kind of hopeless now T.T (please?)

Update!

omgoodness... i luv this story! so thrilling

where are they taking kyo? you must write forth with

lol! that WAS very interesting...-crickets-... ...no, it seriously WAS intersesting...-more crickets- gr..-gets bug spray- now, where was i...oh yes! i thoughr that was really, really interesting..-waits for crickets, but none come- yay! the crickets agree with me! update soon!

good story line but just to let you know... you spelled Tohru wrong IT IS NOT AND I REPEAT NOT - SPELLED (Tooru) IT IS TOHRU (T-O-H-R-U)

Gomen but that kind of just pissed me off cuz you spelled Tohru's name wrong

shes like the main charactor and i question if you've ever read the series or did you just watch the DVDs

Again Gomen

Ane-chan

nice.. i really have liked your fic... hope to see the next chapteer really SOON!

and dont worry..

se ya later!

AH! COULD YOU HAVE LEFT A BIGGER CLIFF HANGER? PLEASE WRITE MORE I BEG OF YOU! PLEASE! PLEASE! PLEASE! PLEASE!

KittyMojo

great story...love the little conversations...": You hurt Tooru"...how sweet

it was good! but hurry up and write more

very interesting update soon.

Ha ha, I have fun writing conversation things too...Good chapter though it was pretty interesting! But I though Akito was stronger than the zodiac just because he was the god...well anyway if you want to see somebody elses fun rambling AKA authors notes you can read my story! -hint hint- its also a kyohru D so yah well good chapter and update soon sincerly

Chibi-Cookies

formerly furuba girl 24

Greetings from the planet of Storks!

NO! writers block get it.i have it too many times,due to all of my randomness. and Kyo's bein such a basterd! (swacks Kyo plushie doll over the head)

heehe, i get distracted when writing as well. im just writin along, near my window, and then im like, "OO,a stork!" and i stop writing to admire the pretty stork,of course.

so yeah..thats jsut me...adn ure no better off than my story, i make up a lot of useles,random facts and never explain them...now im rambling.

UPDATE SOON OR AN ARMY OF KYO PLUSHIE DOLLS AND STORKS WILL RAID YOUR HOUSE ADN EAT ALL OF YOUR RIGHT SHOES!

ure friend swept up in utter oddness and randomest,

~TsubasaKyo~

That was a beautiful chapter! I thought it was all very in character as well. It almost made me cry! *sigh* Gorgeous!

Ciao!

I was hoping this one would get updated soon! I was wondering where you went. Anyway, great chapter. Accepting Yuki is probably going to be really hard for Kyo. But it's better that he does. And I'm with you on Akito. I like her a bit more now that I know more about her. Though I wish I didn't know he was a she. arg...damn spoilers...and low will power to resist reading online. Haha, I hope you update soon. It's a good story, and I'd like to see more soon.

hey i really like this story please continue it soon!

-liz