wow! nice job!

Excellent story ! Am chkin out thesequel now!

I like you.

You definately had me interestedthe entire time, and it was very well-written.

Keep writing.

-Taylor Tonks

Love it! I think you meant "paparazzi", not "paparazzo" in the fourth "paragraph" XD

Aww, once again, amazing work! Excellent job :)

This was a joy to read! I'm sad it's over, but please don't stop writing!

I hate the spying brat already. Spider Man was always too nice. Haha, good job, keep up the good work!

Good start! I look forward to reading the rest of it.

wow that was really great. good job!

Okay, seriously, this Andy kid is annoying. I hope Spidey kicks his ass. But anyway, I'm off to read the next chapter. Great job!

Eep! Harry. Yay. And to be honest, for a second I honestly believed he'd forgiven Peter . . . hm . . .

Aw, and he was so close! Poor Pete, he can't catch a break. :)

Good. I liked his attempt at a proposal in Spider Man 3 as well. That was funny: Bruce Campbell played some kind of role in each movie (the guy who gave him the name Spider Man in the first one, the mean usher in the second one and the mater'd (don't know how to spell that) in the third one) and his charchter was so funny always messing up the engagment attempt.

I'm glad this is posted! Nice story!

(laughs his head off at Jameson) Oh man gotta love how you portrayed him. I saw Spiderman 3 this weekend and he was almost as funny as that Mater'D played by Bruce Campbell (guy who kept acidently sending the champainge at the wrong time, that's one of my favorite actors he has a cameo in every Spider Man movie so far: he was the wrestling announcer in the first one, the usher from hell in the second one and the resturant guy in the third one). Jameson's scene where he had to pay that little girl a hundred bucks to use her camera and then more for the film in it was just hilarious. Also it was hilarious during the scene where his secratary was causing his desk to jump every time she needed to remind him of something (not surprised he has high blood pressure- the way he acts I'm surprised he hasn't had a stroke from it yet).