Oh no, poor Virgil, I can't believe you killed Caitlin!

Wonderful story though, the emotions were portrayed beautifully.

Very very cool (who wouldn't want to be in Caitlin's position?). You have a very delicate touch with their meeting, very nice in this in-yer-face (misspelling intended) era. Need to ask this: Was Virg doing Foschek drops in T2 during the course of the fire? Or am I jumping the gun here...

I'll read on, am loving this.

KatSol

Ah God, this is wonderful; you've definitely nailed the weariness and the frustration felt when you just cannot, no matter what you do, save someone. That emotion over time can so lead one to make extreme decisions and you've expressed it so well!

Am happily moving on to the next Chapter!

interisting

Awesome! I am so glad that Virgil is once again surrounded by his brothers and father. Sad that Caitlin died. Hopefully, Virgil will get through this. Look forward to your next update-You are doing great.

OMG i cant believe you killed caitlin! is virgil dead? you cant kill them both thats fair oh well.

Great story anyway keep going :) cant wait for the next chapter!

Please don't let Virgil die! I can't stand cliffhangers update soon.

oh wow very emotional, yet so sad in some ways. espescially cos of what i think virgil was going to ask her.

update soon, will virgil be alright?

storm05

Great story! I can't wait for the next chapter. You are doing an awesome job. I hope that Scott goes to New York to help Virgil. Those two need each other and rely on each other's strenghth. It seems unnatural for one to be without the other.

Hey- I really like your story- I can't believe it's your first! Please update soon!

Anna

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yeah i know what u mean. it's confusing ain't it cos some sites say john's older and others say virgil. but hey anyways another great chapter added to this great story.

once more looking forward to the next,

storm05

Hey, don't stop there! Wow, that was really good, and I was all involved... darn you cliffhangers. Anxiously waiting for next chapter! Update, update!

wow this is so good i can't wait to read more!

amy x

hey glad u updated so fast. it was another great chapter for a first fic. oh and welcome to the 'family' of thunderbird writers by the way.

really enjoyable, really liked the bit about virgil and scott at the end, please don't say we've lost him for good.

and also your paragraphs aren't bunched together at all i don't think. but if your worried before you post it to the document manager make sure there's a double space in between each paragraph that way you shouldn't have a problem.

hope you find that info useful,

storm05

This has the promise of a really good story i hope you will continue with it.