Really good over all, though the story kind of confused me. Was in supposed to be read backward? Ah well, it's HSLO and that's good enough for me.

:(

Man, that sucked. I don't mean the writing, because that was amazing. That was such a beautiful story. I mean the way things turned out. :( :( :(

This is going on my favorites. This was a really great story.

It's avery beautiful story. Tragic (Han, why didn't you realize she was leaving?), but beautiful.

I like the idea of Han and leia not ending up together but still wanting to be together. It kind of reminds me of the old Alan Alda movie, "Same Time, Next Year." But nicer.

Honestly, Leia comes across as rather shallow in this story. If she thinks that Han was only using her for sex, then she isn't the character I remember from the movies. I don't see her motivation for marrying Isolder over Han, especially when she was pregnant with Han's child. She should have given Han a chance to say something instead of walking away. And then years later, when Han finally gets a chance to say those three words to her, she walks away again. It is obvious she is not in love with her husband, Isolder, so why isn't she willing to give Han a chance to explain himself, or at least redeem himself?

So, I'm not sure if what you wrote is what you expected to write, but the character of Leia just doesn't come across as in-character for me.

Honestly, Leia comes across as rather shallow in this story. If she thinks that Han was only using her for sex, then she isn't the character I remember from the movies. I don't see her motivation for marrying Isolder over Han, especially when she was pregnant with Han's child. She should have given Han a chance to say something instead of walking away. And then years later, when Han finally gets a chance to say those three words to her, she walks away again. It is obvious she is not in love with her husband, Isolder, so why isn't she willing to give Han a chance to explain himself, or at least redeem himself?

So, I'm not sure if what you wrote is what you expected to write, but the character of Leia just doesn't come across as in-character for me.

That was so sad. I hate it when they don't get eachother! Why did she leave? Will there be more? Please, let there be more, and let there be a happily ever after! (we all know that could never be with Isolder!)