Great story! I sort of feel sorry for Peter...

Maybe he does have a conscience after all... I liked that you didn't make him a stupid, bumbling idiot. Also loved the title and the last line.

very impressive indeed

this is the very first I've ever been reviewing someone's fictions here, I like your style of writing and deeply comprehension of the books

when I just finished it, a chill was raising from the bottom of my heart, I felt really sad to Peter

I was horrified by the last two sentences, the vengeful glint in Remus and Sirius's eyes ...

how touching !

Finally! A story that doesn't condemn Peter Pettrigrew! It's refreshing to hear a story where Peter isn't a sniveling brat who's stupid and you made it sound realistic also. That's sort of the way, I picture Peter. Wonderful job :)

Oh. *applause* I liked it very much. At first I thought, aww, man, ANOTHER 'boo hoo I'm Peter Pettigrew, I hated life and my dad was abusive, I was in always in the shadow of my brilliant friends; that's why I turned to the dark side, please don't hate me...'

I liked how you made Peter befriend Sirius, I think that's an interesting twist, if you accept what you built for Peter's family backround as true, then they're very much alike, aren't they? Also how you made the Mauraders kind of blend together... it's very unrealistic how some people make them all meet on the same day, and instantly become buddies. I think that the development of their friendship would have followed more along the lines of Harry, Ron, and Hermione's- a particular incident makes you aware of the other person's existance, then gradually you begin to warm to each other.

Anyways, enough of my rambling! Great story. I'm off to read 'Wedding Bliss'- I'm incredibly happy that you've written more stories, I can't get enough of them!

Still loving your occasional stories. This was so...depressing. You really took Peter to a whole new level with his musing. Great job!

Very well written as always. You almost made me feel sorry for Peter... almost. Please grace us with another story soon for they are all so wonderful!