Id get rid of fat man n the queen

I've been reading your story all evening, it's now almost 4AM.

Yeah.

This was my first DotD fanfiction and it was *amazing* and captivating.

I loved the characters but spent a lot of time hoping Tara or Jonathan would die...

I don't know what else to say, other than I loved it!

Sarah

I don't know how you started with a charming little zombie apocalypse story and shifted the characters into the world of my favourite Romero movie, but damn it all if you did and damn it all if I enjoyed the heck out of it. Props all around here - not the happiest ending (Unless Jesse, Jaime, Aaron and Emily all joined up with Mulligan after Big Daddy and his stenches destroyed the city, in which case it becomes a little better than just Tara/Pretty Boy surviving with Dead Reckoning). Hehe, now if I reread, all I'll think about will be Natalie being that stripper that showed up in the scene in Chihuahua's, Justin eventually getting torn to shreds as Mouse, Tara quieting down a bit and becoming DR's driver, Matthew eventually getting zombified and killed by Riley...

Well played, DS. :D

Damn girl!

I loved your story. I'm so happy you turned Tara into Prettyboy, because Prettyboy is like my fav character! Keep a rocking with your writing.

cya

I must say that was some wonderful story telling. I hated all of the characters at one point or another, but understood them well enough to see through thier eyes.

The pacing was perfect! But it was such a good tale I read in two sittings. That both the fast moving zombie and classic zombie "versions" were wven togrther was a nice touch.

The epilouge was a bonus.

Great story, I highly recommend it. Three thumbs up!

Nice job! I really enjoyed how you tied the epilogue in so well with "Land of the Dead." Keep writing, I'll keep reading!

Interesting ending. I like how you tied Land of the Dead into this, pretty neat idea. Justin being mouse, sucks for him, he gets it bad in the movie. Natalie doesnt die? I thought for sure she would. Kick ass story, shame it had to end.

This isnt the end of the story is it? I need more closure LOL. This was a good story. I like what you did with Richard, it leaves your it to your imagination. Bummer Sean died, I liked him. Kick ass chapter! Oh, and what happens to Natalie? Will she die or not?

_.No offense, But I liked it better when you focused on those only charries in the dating company, I didn't get it when you skipped from there to Kaufman and Cholo.

-Karen Zombie~

I must applaud you. This is well written, the bad guys are getting on my nerves and the overall atmosphere is wondrous.

I especially like Emily and Matthew now.. I absolutely adore reading stories like him.. Completely innocent one moment, cold the next.

HA! Richard got what was coming to him, the bastard. I dont know why you didnt like this chapter. I liked it. Matt would have been a good addition in the movie Hostel LOL. That was brutal yet good. So do we get to see them escape?

AH! For a short second there, I though Natalie was going to be one of the good guys. Nice twist! AHH! I must know whats going to happen! Hurry up with Chapter 23!

Uh oh! I am so confused! Who's good, who's bad. AH! The Catholic talk was funny. I'm lovin the story, it's getting more intense. Update soon, again!

HA HA! The plot thickens even more! I am curious as to what Natalie is up to. Is she bullshitting? Or is it the truth? And Richard scamming Justin, things are getting interesting. UPDATE SOON!

Nice! You got Cholo in there! Sweet! I really like the tie in. And the whole plan of Richards is getting interesting. Good chapter! Update soon, I'm loving it!