Short and funny. Good writing. Thanks for the laugh!

funny, funny, funny

Hilarious. XD Not quite the Buddha that Kenshin and Misao envisioned her as, but no less capable of handling Saito. :P My favorite line was "I'm in the middle of killing this man..." and Tokio's response and Shibumi begging her not to go...Well, I guess that's three lines, but they were all hilarious. Excellent job. I enjoyed it very much.

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You're right. I love how casual she is about the whole thing. I'm glad I stumbled across your writing.

You said that this poped up in your head when tou had a cold... did you posibly have a very high fever to? Don't misunderstand me I like it vey much I just can't understand where you get this stuff from! You're a genius!

/Indusina

LMAO.

Pure genius. XD

thats so funny! great job!

LOL that was very cute

Oh, that made me laugh. Hard. I nearly wet myself. That's a keeper, yup, that's a keeper...

Hahaha. I have to hand it to you with that one. Couldn't have laughed any harder.

And in the middle of the humor, Tokio-Saitou interaction was lovely and shows the gems of a longer story needing to be written. ;)

That was bloody brilliant. It's a great scene to start with, and then...

"Hajime!"

"Oh hell."

And I loved Shibumi's lines to Tokio. I think the more serious the scene/character, the more fun it is to parody.

Well at least I wasn't cackling again, but my amused chuckles are getting me death glares. But, yeah, Tokio probably has Saito very well trained... :chuckle-snerk:

Very cute.

“Now, where was I? Oh yes... my character development monologue. AHEM You tame a man with money. But there is nothing that can tame a Miburo.”

“Except your wife.”

“Yes, fine—nothing except my wife. Happy now?”

“Not especially.”

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Great story, makes u wanna cry for Saito though *sniffing*

Wonder wat she does when she finds him smoking.