This is fantastic! I haven't laughed like that in a long while. Thank you, MariaShadow. Thank you! The whole scene with Jazz and the Kea... priceless! I also found the other 'bots' response to Jazz and Hound's intial "Well, y'see... there was this girl..." bit highly amusing. :D It's not everyday that Prowl has a hard time keeping his composure. XD Thank you again, MariaShadow. Your stories are amazing!

Your fellow Transformers fan and writer,
Serling (aka Triceratonfan4).

Teehee, very nifty. _ I'm currently vacationing in Hawaii and got to see the haka at the Polynesian Cultural Center. Very cool stuff. P I wonder how the 'cons would react if all the Autobots suddenly started doing that at the beginning of a battle. XD;

Aw man, I'm jealous! Always wanted to visit New Zealand for myself. Curse my limited budget...

Woulda liked to see Hound and Jazz doing that dance. I'd pay good money for that. ;)

That was great. A tad on the tourist book side, but it still makes me want to visit - might see an Autobot or two along with the scenery. :) Characterization was fantastic, as usual in your writing.

Oh and I was waiting for this one too! I loved hearing about some of the facts about New Zealand. Once again, I must bow to the power of the Kiwi people. Jazz and Hound were written wonderfully and their obvious excitement was contagious. 'There was this girl...' lol, brilliant!

I liked it, the parts with the kea trying to eat Jazz and the haka. The fic does read a little like a tourist guide without much story in it, but it was very informative.

Hee hee. Oh man, you really like to put these guys in some funny situations, don't you?

Hah. Nice one. Loved the part with the parrots.

lovely work Shades, and i have the strangest scene in my head of all the Bots doing the Haka right before they charge the Cons...

Aw... real cute! :D he... Sounds like Jazz and Hound had a *blast!* X3 -grins- Interesting cultural notes, too. :D Heh... I bet that dance would be _something_ to see! :D Very cute little story... well-done with the imagery and the dialouge - the characterization is all spot-on! Kudos! :D *claps*

E! I love it! Great story as always Mariashadow. :) Love the "Well there was this girl..." and Jazz being all nervous about it. Jynx is getting jealous. ;) *snickers* Curious about Lilt too. We gunna see more of this mysterious historian?