Brilliant! I love it! Love it! Love it! I wish I could write like you, but I just dont think Im a deep enough person. _!

it was great i loved it!

That was interesting. I don't know how else to describe it. Interesting in a good way. I liked it.

Finally! some IC-ness!

THANK you!

no spelling/structure errors that i can see

and i liked what you wrote about -especially the IC-ness because i'm a nit-pick-y harpy about it

and yeah... there really isn't much else to say

good job

Aw :swoons: XD the ending, I really liked the ending it was funny xP

wow, the was nicely done.. the tension between the two.. you described it so well! This is one of those IC realistic piece of work.. I love it

same old same old

Here's a bloody review:

If you cut me, I bleed.

Yours Truly,

The Frosty Resistance, yo.

*dies* That was so cute and wonderfully written! The line that inspired this was really nice, I like it. *pockets it for future use*

Also, I'd love if you would beta for me! I added you to msn so that we could chat about it. Thanks a ton and awesome story!

POOF

toodles

TJ

word up.

Wow... That was great! I really like the way you portrayed Naruto, I think he was very IC. Sasuke was good too _ I haven't read the poem, but when I read that sentence I had interpreted it in another way, so I was surprised to hear Sasuke's explanation. Though it did make good sense Anyway, I really liked this piece! Good luck on your paper/project _