This shit was confusing as fuck literally had no clue wtf I was reading

this story was almost really good but there was a lot of confusing things. the story didn't really feel cohesive, and a lot of the stuff that happened felt like they happened for no reason, like the arguments between blaise, tracey, and antares. it was all just kind of messy and stagnant with the plot

I liked this story from the very first paragraph it's well written and believable. 11 chapters in, though, I can't help but hope for more. I somehow am feeling a little empty and dispassionate. I'll continue reading a bit more, perhaps I'll find what I'm looking for in the next few chapters. Thanks for sharing your talent!

Wow

you lost me in chapter 2

The real problem is the fact that Bella keeps sending him down there on his own in the first place. I hope to get some more backstory in the coming chapters

Antares iss not allowed to love any other parent than Bellatrix.

Bella x Severus, a pairing I have delved into many times. Not may of them worth the reading, and I've got to say, I think this'll turn out well... Even if they don't become a real 'thing'.

Ah, I love it~! I'm a huge Bellatrix fan...

Oooh, a Bellatrix and Harry centric story? Seems interesting.

WOAHHH!

Holy hell that was great! I really like Antares' character and I'll definitely check out your sequel sometime in the future :)

I really like the fanatical as Bellatrix is and even if the child would have been a means to an end,it's still incredibly wrong of them to blame her for something which she can't help.I just want her husband to die now xD

What a strange style, to write some words together... or its just sloth...

For real... because of this style its more harder to read youre fanfic... and not so relaxing as it shold be... more like work on correcting a grammer...

Yeah you are right Herodotus was an ancient Greek historian. But the story is very good all the same.