Lame Yaio

I like it! I've started delving into this fandom so I'm looking for all these awesome slash fics to read now. lol

I really love this story!
Please update really soon!
Thanx!

I loved it. For some reason the part where odd sits down and says, "Ants." Cracked me up.

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This was very good. It reminded me alot of when i had my first breakup and my best friend conferted me. Im a begginer writer. Do you think you could give me some tips? Thanks for uploading, its a very god story.

-BlueFirePhonix

this was very well paced, it gave the reader a chance to go through the emotions with them and watch the transitional-stage, from friends to boyfriends.

Most people can't get the transition correct and change them into couple too eradicly, but you did so just right. I think this was very well wrote, and hope you make more off of this story.

Best regards: Fran.

Good story. Keep writing! Also, i am a new writer, and trying to write a story. Could you beta read it once its done and give me a few pointers?

I like this...short'n sweet

-Sentai

I think you should do a sequel or something! It's fantastic; well written, good (if short) plot, and it made me "awwwww!"

Well done!

Good story, really liked it, very well done on the emotions, I had to laugh at the beginning with Ulrich and the ants. Thanks for posting

aw! kawaii! i luv odd, and if i could id claim him, but ive always liked odd/ulrich pairings, im a fan for boy/girl pairings, but i find that alot of boy/boy pairings r just cute or perfect, snd..honestly, odds emotions and ulrichs seemingly lack of emotions make them a perfect pair, plus, they just look cute together, oops...rambled sry, good story tho, i like it! keep up the good work!

So sweet! I love it!

Are you going to continue it?

Wow! I was just thinking about Odd and Ulrich being gay last week! I totally love the idea! I'm obsessed with Odd right now so I really love this story. There are some misspelled words but it doesn't really matter. This is so awesome! I might even write a story of my own about Ulrich and Odd. Fantastic work! Bravo!