What a great story. I think you got the characterization down!

Oh what's about to happen? I can't wait to find out.

omg! i want to know what happened next! Gon's bluntness and naivety coupled with Killua's straightforwardness makes up for a mind-blowing scene!good job!

This is so well-written and sweet, and I loved every bit of their interactions . You captured their relationship perfectly. Thank you for this wonderful piece! Forever favorited.

I can't! Omg this was so awesome and adorable and I'm reading this in school and I bet, well I KNOW, I look totally retarded smiling to my phone like this. This was just so adorable and it's totally something I can imagine happening! You did an awesome on, thank you so much for writing this! Xoxo

I wish I could favourite this more than once. One time just isn't enough to encompass my feelings ! ! ! The characterisation is so flawless I had to take a moment. Like, oh my god, they /would/ so why /haven't they/? Type of thing. Amazing work! Kudos!

Oh my God. Gon, you're so... just ah, you perfectly captured both of their personalities with this. So adorably awkward, I love it.

This is the first time in a long time that I read a story that gave me second hand embarrassment. I blushed a couple of times, too. I even said, "Oh my f***ing God, Gon," once. But then Killua's replies had my jaw dropping open.

This story is top notch. Great characterization and amazing introspective writing. It feels like it would fit in perfectly to canon material.

Ah! It was great! Thank for your hard work!

Love this :')

Aw this was so cute3 tho I wouldn't have minded a few extra paragraphs LOL but yeah really sweet, I liked it a lot:D

This was interesting. Ands remembers don'ts apologizies fors somethings yous enjoyed!

BUT, WHAT ABOUT THE SEX!? XD

Great story by the way! :P

So gooooood! Omg 2k words of pure glory. And hotness. Hell, I would have loved to see Killua's reaction. I bet he got super nervous all of a sudden. Would you let me translate this story? Of course you are getting all the credits, I'm just for sharing. If you don't want to, just tell me and I will respect your decision.I just enjoyed this so muuch!

See you!

toooo cute XD

This. Was. Brilliant. Perfect. In character. Just. Brilliant.

Thanks.