Poor Salazar. He was born into evil and practically threatened to be against all of those who don't have pureblood. :)

For some reason, this reminded me of Matilda. Just because of her obsession with reading. :) I love that the father has a soft spot for her because she's different to her sisters. :)

I've always held a soft spot for Helga - I don't know why. This was super cute. :)

Very cute portrayal of Godric Gryffindor! I like the whole "my little lion cub" thing because it ends up being the crest for Gryffindor. xD

I really enjoy reading Founder stories so I can't wait to get on to the next chapter. :)

I really like this and I hope you continue with it! Wow... I never imagined that something like that would happen but not that I think about it it seems highly probable. THis is very very good and I didn't notice and grammar, spelling, etc. mistakes.

Happy Writing!

~DancingWithRoses

To think that you started writing this story your junior year... I'm happy that you've finally got a background for each of the founding four. And I appreciate the slight nod to your paper-bloodying friends- you should keep writing if you have the time.

Poor Sal!

*Sorry about the late review, I'm living w/o accessible internet. (ick)

I like it! Short but meaningful.

HA! Finally. I swear fanfiction doesn't like me at times. Anyway. What do I say? It's nice to see you writing again, and of course,I remember you! I love how you display the founders of the children, especially Rowena. You highlight the charastics of each of them quite well. Keep up the updates and I'll try to keep up the reviews!

~Sin

I think Rowena might be my favorite, and I like her chapter! I like her father... "it's a shame I forgot to punish you" hehe. Looking forward to Salazar!

one of your old faithfuls right here. glad your back.

Hooray for bring back a story that was put on hiatus almost four years ago! Wow...

I like the premise of this story, and I like the details you give about the founders as children. I think by the time you're done they will each have a character of their own that we never really got from the books.

I hardly remember what to write for a fanfic review...

Keep writing!

I remember this! We edited these in pre-calc when we weren't eating paper or practicing our forgery! What happened to the other founders' stories? I know you wrote more than just this one. I'm going to start another fanfic when school gets out I think.

Love,

Liza

great job! seriously, this sounds really good, but longer chapter please! :D. ive only read one other founders story than this, and its really good. this story was recommended to me by your friend EternalEcho, and really is as good as she said it was. you dont have as many reviews as you deserve! great job again and update soon!

FDOS