| Reviews for A new day Dawning |
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   brankel1 chapter 24 . 1/6/2019 Loved it. Glad they are married& going to have a baby. |
| Guest chapter 14 . 5/4/2018 I hope you realize that that River wouldn't have a hymen by this point. It would have broken the first time she used a tampon, when Jayne was fingering her, and completely gone when they used the scope. This is assuming there was anything still there considering how physically active River was as a child. The hymen isn't a magical piece of flesh that only breaks when a penis is inserted. |
| Wicked.Onna chapter 2 . 4/12/2017 not sure but if we go with earth calendar Kaylee had the same birthday as my own father which is kind of cool |
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/20/2017 Very good! I think you got the characters perfect. |
| DonnaDarko chapter 2 . 4/28/2016 Hello, I like the storyline, but the tenses are so confused that I can't continue. I'd be happy to beta for you if you'd like to do some rewrites. Thanks, DonnaDarko |
| shika93 chapter 24 . 12/25/2015 Awesome story. |
| shika93 chapter 23 . 12/25/2015 Awesome! |
| shika93 chapter 19 . 12/25/2015 Haha AWESOME. |
| shika93 chapter 16 . 12/25/2015 Good chapter.! |
| shika93 chapter 14 . 12/25/2015 Aw good chapter. |
| shika93 chapter 13 . 12/25/2015 Ha good chapter. |
| shika93 chapter 11 . 12/25/2015 Good chapter |
| shika93 chapter 2 . 12/24/2015 Good chapter |
| Serenityin2 chapter 24 . 10/28/2015 Love this story, glad everyone got a happy ending. Would love to see Jayen as a dad. |
| Clementine Buttersnaps chapter 4 . 8/7/2015 River is such a badass. I wish she wasn't so young in the show, I seriously think Jayne would have liked her. And how adorable to picture a little River bringing out charts and graphs to prove her point with her dad and get out of trouble. |
