What is wrong with this story? 24 pairs of pants blah blah blah. Why would we care? Red blood eyes? Hermione acts so UNLIKE her normal self. The Hermione Granger we know and love wouldn't start shrieking and dancing just because she got hot. She's PROUD of her muggleborn status

Brilliant ending!

What about Pansy being a Death Eater?

Finally had enough finally waking up to who we are becoming
Open your eyes she can fight the dark there's a new light coming open your eyes.
Open your eyes by Bea Miller

awesome so far, but jsyk Mrs is not used for nonmarried peeps.

WHYYYY WHHYYYYYY DID IT HAVE TO END THIS WAS LIKE THE BEST ONE I HAVE EVER READ I DONT KNOW WHAT TO DO WITH MY LIFE NOW

dreadful

This is so good

This story is absolutely fucking shit. Your grammar is a bloody joke, Hermione keeps bloody crying, this story is so childish it’s disgustkng and makes me cringe. Don’t read it people, it’ll do your head in.

hey this is awesome I love this gonna check out your other stories now ! chow!

I thought that the story was amazing! The plot was really unique and different from a lot of other fan fictions that I’ve read so far. I think that you have the potential to become a great other if you only improved on your grammar and spelling as there were errors in almost every sentence during the first few chapters.

Please. You read defiance by dark lord Slytherin, it is the best fanfiction I have read. You can also try blood traitor by zalia . Then maybe idiots who ARE PRO this shit will know what fanfics are supposed to be.

Kyaaaaa is hindi.! Hermione is a brit

Awesome

no sequel aaaaw