The first chapter is beyond stupid. Why would Harry walk away from family considering what he saw in the mirror of Erised?

Umm.. Apparition?

Hello,
I rather liked this fic, even though there are so many non canon things (like wrong names, shinobi ranks, horcruxes, biju), which I usually really dislike. Here it feels like a mix between "this fic is so old, that some facs just weren't know back then" and "it was changed to fit in better with the story" so it's alright.
Thanks for the fun characters and the great interactions. I would have liked to read more about the angers anyonymus and what they get up to together.
I also enjoyed that you didn't use every naruto ever mentioned before the manga starts (like hinatas kidnapping or the uchiha massacre) and made it an important plot point. The massacre doesn't happen and that's that. Very awesome!

Harry's grandfather is alive? And is... Oro hmmm...

No, it's Kimimaro.

Sorry... Yakushi Kabuto.

Sorry, but It's Namikaze Minato and Nohara Rin.

In part 1, he's 27, part 2 31-32. [Ibiki Morino]

So, Chakra is just another form of magic. SHinobi are aware that the magical and muggle worlds exist, They can leave whenever they want but no one can go in whitout there authorisation. Okay so anyone who lived in the shinobi continent can get anyone in,... Why didn't they invade for ressource again ? I mean, if they know about the external world and they know that because of the ward the external world have no way of retaliating against them, then what stopped them of invading the external wordl, or at the very least trying to gain allies for their war in it? And what about the timeline? If they separated in 1830 and orochimaru is alive, an adult and the yondaime is still alive And if the yondaime is already hokage, that means that orochimaru is already a also means that they separeted at the end of the warring clan era.(Why did they separate? )Which means that there has been three great war for ressource while they knew that there was a world full of ressource outside the what about the whole madara and Kaguya mess ? What about the whole sage history, the origin of chakra(the fruit and tree) and all that ? How much of it is still valable now that both world has fused ?

Well, interesting beginning.I never actually read a naruto / harry potter fusion fic before. I was always weary of the use of a "hidden continent". Too many risk that the author simply use it's how it is without more the premise seem good (and i never managed to resist reading a story with orochimaru as a character.)So many question. How are the continent separate? Are the shinobi the only one knowing about it? And if that's the case, why didn't they invade before ? cause they never were the kind to simply let an opportunity to get more ressource pass by. If they can't invade, how come orochimaru could come ? If the shinobi are hidden and aware of the existence of the outer world, what do they know about it? Do they know about magic? If they aren't aware of the rest of the world, how did orochimaru discover the rest of the world? How do the shinobi stay hidden from the muggle and wizard? Are the wizards aware of the shinobi existence ? What is the power of a normal genin compared to a normal person? Can wizard even fight with shinobi if they are fast enough to simply dodge all their spell ? And more. Anyway, I'll read and see.I'm looking forwar to see how the two world are meshed.

LOVED THE ENDING!

If hyuga manji dies I totally called it

Sans is Harry's other grandpa

Hello. This is one of the best crossovers that I have read. Fantastic! Mind blowing , keeps me on the edge of my seat to know more. Very well written with no sudden super power ups. Very logical . Do keep writing. All the best.

The ending kinda sucks. Harry left alone with severe ptsd & trauma, not to mention that his body is completely worthless? Blergh. No MoD harry? He kinda deserved a nice long rest in full health, not this worthless old man he has become. / Sad