Reviews for Hermione's baby
ENTRIKIT chapter 11 . 8/11/2004
*hands a gazillion cookies* oh... my... gosh! THAT STORY ROCKED! *grins*
ENTRIKIT chapter 5 . 8/11/2004
I like the fanfic so far, but so you know, Ginny's full name is Ginevra, not Virginia. *smiles and hands cookie* I found that out on JK Rowling's website.
Nikki chapter 11 . 8/5/2004
I loved your story but sorry I didnt review before. Thanks soo much for writting.-Nikki
Ashwinder chapter 1 . 12/6/2002
Hi Julie, I happen to be Carrie's beta on GT. This particular story is not on GT, and therefore has not been betaed by me, but please do a little research if you're going to flame. Carrie is, indeed a GT author.

If you had done some more research, you would know that Carrie's native language is not English. I believe she's stated such in various author's notes. If you can do as well in a second language as Carrie does in English, then maybe you'd have a right to criticise, but even then I'm not so sure.

You state in your review not to take it as a bash, but your tone implies otherwise, and the fact that you even need to justify yourself by saying it's not a bash implies to me that you know very well what you're doing. Please, the next time you decide to review a story, consider the author's feelings and learn how to give constructive criticism. It's all in the tone. You could have said what you said in another manner, and not the hurtful one you chose to use. You could also have pointed to more specific things that Carrie does right.
Julie chapter 1 . 12/4/2002
Ok after reading all these reviews I expected a polished story. While the actual story line is good the writing is awful. You said you had a beta, doesn't look like it to me. Either you are really young or English is not your first language. I want you to understand that I think the base of the story is excellent but you really need some new betas. Also how many times can you have Ginny and Harry gushing love for each other, after a while it starts to cheapen it a bit. Oh and somebody should buy you a thesaurus you repeat the same adjectives over and over. Furthermore you need to learn tenses. Please do not take this review as a bash, I think your story has real promise but the other reviewers are not doing you any favors not pointing out the bad grammar and lack of style. Maybe you should go to , they have some really great betas there. Good luck and keep it up, practice makes perfect.
Yolanda chapter 10 . 4/17/2002
Carrie, I think you really left yourself a lot of room for a great sequel. We need to know more about Wardena. I'm glad that Joshua instantly readjusted to his parents, but I was also touched by the way he went to Ron and Hermione.

As always, you write Harry very well. You did a great job with this story. It was a big undertaking. Sequel!
Sehrish chapter 10 . 4/2/2002
this chapter is worth to surely we want epiloge or better be squeal.
la2ur2a chapter 10 . 4/1/2002
yw... I think it was worth the wait! It was excellent! * gives two thumbs up. *

I know... I get distracted from my own stories half of the time... But that's ok...

Yes! Put up a Epilogue! Please?
Moony Lover chapter 10 . 4/1/2002
I loved this finnal chap!Yes! I want an epilogue!YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YE SYE S. What took you so long to write? Oh never mind! It's ok! O) I loved it, and happy easter to you! although it was yesterday! O)
Celtic Ember chapter 5 . 4/1/2002
I found this listed as a favorite fic in so many places, but I didn't find it until I stumbled over it. Odd, isn't it? I'm really enjoying the story.
SwtGrl525 chapter 10 . 3/31/2002
WOW! that was awesome. i loved ur creativity. Will there be a epilouge, or a sequel? keep up the wonderful wrk!
Elizabeth Ellie Valerie Huttin chapter 4 . 3/31/2002
I just thought you might like to know, the song is "Leaving On A Jet Plane" by John Denver. I had to sing it for a choir concert last year, but I got sick the day of the concert and somebody else ahd to sing it for me.
FIVE-IN-ONE chapter 1 . 3/31/2002
good, from beginning to end. i enjoyed it very much, i even the entire story. but now that is over, are you doing a sequel? what going to happen to joshua and wardena? does joshua get a sister later on? how will the charaters children do in hogwarts? i know future generation hogwarts is a bit too poular, but i like to read in your point of view, and i'm sure others are just as well awaiting a another hp story.
starbuckx chapter 10 . 3/30/2002
Oh, Carrie, this is so wonderful. It was touching and eeeverything I was hoping for and more. You always leave me wanting more and when you do write more it's even better than what I could have imagined it! :)
Danielle chapter 9 . 1/13/2002
Aw, Carrie! I loved that chapter! Hermione and the baby are all right, Ginny is all right, they've all been reuinited. *sigh* Almost everything is right with their world. I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter! Please get it out, soon!
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