There should be 24 prefects.

It should be "...I'll get it to the other five.".

Wouldn't having Granger as Harry and Hermione's last name be suspicious? I mean, the Hogwarts staff would recognize the name when the Trio start their first year.

what...what... why...

but but but...

(laughs lightly)
Well, someone's excited!
But why can't Sirius and Remus go back in time with Harry?

Harry was too immature. He acted like a five-year-old, not a seventeen-year-old who was recently tortured.

Why!

That idiot hasant updated in over a year!

You were an awesome writer why did you have to give it to that dunderhead?

Well thanks for ruining a perfectly good story.

**Bursts into tears**

Why!

**sniffles queity in corner, rocking back and forth in fetal position**

Do you hate every single living thing that ever existed?

Well?

I await your anwser

**Laughs mainaically**

Great story so far!

this review is really for chapter 6 is there a any way some one can fix that chapter because i am confused about what has happen because they get there and next thing u know is harry has a nightmare

You had a promising story up until mention of rape; its a personal thing. your writing is eloquent and you have immpecable spelling and grammar: which is a rarity in fanfiction for some reason

This is a great story and I have read the last bit and I thought it wasn't as good because it did not have the whole story

Hufflepuff didn't mkae the room of requirement, just so you know

The flying description sucked, Harry never did that, the broom is called a firebolt

That was great. I went to redheadeddeliquents profile. It wasn't there. I hope to see it soon.