I think I prefer Amita's POV over Charlie's. Maybe its easier for me to see the woman's POV. Both though, were very enjoyable. Thanks.

OK, I cant really give you anything con., but I can tell you something I was screaming at charlie during thsi semi fight scene:

"Give the kid a break! She just freaking lost her virginity!"

After this week's episode, I went on the hunt for Charlie/Amita fic, and after several frustrating attempts, hit the motherlode with your stories. They are exactly what I was looking for-no gasping adolescent romance-novel fumbling prose, but exactly the characters I see on screen, brilliant and gorgeous and incredibly conscious of the consequences of their actions. And I love how you show Charlie and Amita's relationship at that point in the series. Also? Sexy as HELL. Seriously. I tend towards the "less can be so much more" when it comes to romance, and I love what you choose to show, and what you allow us to conjure for ourselves. Also, I am a massive fan of the slow burn, and you provided that beautifully. Thank you so much.

You should write more stories, this and the one before are really great.

Just wonderful. And sad. And realistic. Very well done and completly in character. Great job!

Love the story! A little to long for me but way good to read. I love Charlie!

Fantastic! You captured the characters perfectly and you have a way of making the reader picture whole scenes without describing too much...well I guess that's called a talent ;) Keep on writing great and juicy stories for us!

Excellent use of introspection about the characters. I do like the show, not only for its concept but for its interesting characters. Good to know I share this interest with many others.

uv done it again! another superb fic! now if only it was lik this on the show...but then it couldnt be a pg13 show...

Once again as close to perfection as you can get. Although the end once again screams out for a continuation. I do hope you write more, I'm addicted to your stories. Its the ONLY way I can get my Charlie/Amita fix man!

They are just so intelligently written and in character as well as being sweet and insanely hot. Not to mention you told the story as it was meant to be written and let it unfold, instead of doing what many writers do and skipping out on important description and underlying emotion in order to cut the word count. Not only does that treat the reader as an intelligent human but it also shows how much you care about what you write and how much work and love goes into it.

Once again, tremendous job.

Hahah love your stories and comments!