This was stunning. Just stunning. One of my favorite one-shots in this fandom.

wonderful!

Love it!

this is for all of the readers who count the number of reviews before reading a fic...this is a good read! it's not a mere JacksonxLisa smutfest, although i'll read that, too. hehe. this is good because we get a glimpse into the psyche of the pair, so it isn't so difficult to understand how they'd have some hot, passionate "sexy time," inspite of everything that happened between them. ;-)

So I was listening to my playlist and Joshua Radin's "What If You" came on just as I clicked on your fic to read...

oh...

There may have been tears.

This was really beautiful. So evocative and full of emotion. My hat's off to you, silentsister.

Wow, this was so wonderfully done. Very tasteful, yet sexy at the same time. Your writing seems to have taken these characters and had given them a new life. You did such a great job at that, but still keeping to character. In fact, I think this is how I've viewed their relationship post-movie. Never quite *there*, but close enough so that they can revel in each other. Beautiful job.

that's me

ahhelga

aka Pauline

That was a good one-shot. A really nice read, well done, you should be proud.

Gah, I love this. I can't even begin to tell you how much. The hurried movements; you can almost feel the raw emotions. The story's awesome, good job!

i love it! _

Awesome. Incredibly vivid and totally in character. Loved every word of it. This was especially great and accurate:

"He didn't doubt her fidelity in the least – he knew, in that arrogant, self-assured, and completely correct way of his that she thought only of him. She didn't doubt him either, for his obssession with her was as plain as day."

By the way, could you PM me the url of that Yahoo group please? Thanks. :)

That was amazing! There's not a single word to describe what i think of your great work here, thank you!

Wow...PWP makes me happy. Especially when it's JacksonxLisa. Rock on, man.

That was lovely and beautiful. I loved the characterizations and interactions :). You, Asanji and perletwo were probably the first Jackson/Lisa authors in the fandom and I love all of your works :).

Wow. That was incredibly detailed, beautiful, realistic, and bittersweet. Wonderful job.

Your power of description is beyond compare. I felt like a voyeur in the room with them. What a gift to be able to say so much with the use of so few words. Excellent... simply excellent.