| Reviews for Blood of the Mother |
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Love2read23 chapter 40 . 7/16 Phew, I'm glad this was a bit wrapped up and summarized. I was worried it was going to be a cilffy but was marked completed. I love the idea of Gryffindors invading Severus' quarters. Students being in his rooms to play board games is kind of ridiculous. I hope his snakes start to join as that seems like the most adorable thing, little firsties playing Shoots and Ladders with the dungeon bat. Thank you for writing. I really liked the improved relationship between Harry and Dudley. I loved how it was love that destroyed Voldie but more powerful and active than in canon. Harry put Voldie's soul to rest and basically cremated him, scattering his ashes to the winds. I'm glad that Severus is discovering his own personality. it's interesting that his mother and grandfather would have actual compulsions on him. The ones from his mother at least didn't seem deliberate and that's kind of sad to imagine that parents' mantras can force obedience like that. Reminds me of Ella Enchanted (one of my favorite books from childhood). The changes to Hogwarts, at least the way Severus is changing the way he'll teach potions, are exciting. Though I can't imagine having to cram 3 years of advanced potions into one. The regular O NEWT students don't even have to do that. I feel for them so much but it's nice of Severus to give them that opportunity. Thank you for writing. |
Love2read23 chapter 30 . 7/16 I laughed and really liked this line, "I didn't say I didn't like it, I just didn't realized that I'd be entertaining Gryffindors enough to need such a specialized piece of furniture.' |
Love2read23 chapter 28 . 7/16 Sleeveless robes seems incredibly impractical for potion work. I'm guessing these are supposed to protect Severus from potion spills and explosions but wouldn't the arms be the body parts closest to the cauldron. Arms and face should be the most protected. Maybe just a spell over the cauldron or the body would solve that then. Anyways, great fic. Thank you for writing. Is this going to be slash? With Severus' freedom and freed emotions that cuddling and affection is cute but his subservient behavior would make any relationship with Harry feel wrong. Also, I have expected Severus to confess that he didn't like the sugary porridge when Harry asked if he'd lied or kept anything secret from him. Thank you. |
Love2read23 chapter 24 . 7/16 The way Dumble's and Voldie's compulsions spells interacted would have left Severus not able to feel anything but anger and hate which explains so much. |
ruth hammond chapter 33 . 2/14/2019 Anyone trying to write about that kind of animal is not going to like how it came out...If it were to come out right, the animal would have ceased to live in a gruesome manner...! I do like the use of parts and pieces of such animals being put to use in potions instead of wasted garbage that you have to dispose of some way. Waste not; want not! Thank your daughter for the wonderful children's names. Smile! |
ruth hammond chapter 40 . 2/1/2019 I am so looking forward to the revised story and your sequel...Sometimes the shorter chapters do what they needed...set the scene and do not need to be longer...sound like a teacher? Yep, although many years ago...Boy do I feel old! I have enjoyed this story and thank you for your writing... |
ruth hammond chapter 28 . 1/28/2019 I cheated, I kept reading and did the next chapter. Lots of good laughs... |
ruth hammond chapter 27 . 1/28/2019 What is to flame about this story? It is really good with some laughs and some cries. There is also some waiting for the other shoe to drop about Dumbles...can't wait for that...You are as good as most of my favorites with your cliffies...I must apologize for my lack of regular reviews, I find myself getting into the story and forgetting what I am doing. Between you and you sister, I am glad the I followed the suggestion to check you 2 out... It is now 1:35am and I really need to get some sleep...Dr. appointment in the later am... |
Jake Crepeau chapter 14 . 6/20/2018 I know a lot of people like to write about mpreg. Sorry, but personally, I think that's just plain sick. I'm glad you won't be elaborating on the joke. |
Jake Crepeau chapter 9 . 6/20/2018 The chapters may be short, but the story is abso-freakin'-lutely BRILLIANT! I think we've ALL overlooked the fact that Dudley is also "blood of the mother." And you have truly answered the question of how love can be a weapon. Way to go! |
TLD110166 chapter 13 . 11/21/2017 A slight spelling error. Minuets should be minutes. |
TLD110166 chapter 4 . 11/21/2017 Small spelling error. The street name is Privet Drive, not Privite Drive. |
daisycb chapter 23 . 6/14/2017 Is Dickey Thornprick any relation to the Dickey Thornburg of TMI fame? |
TLD110166 chapter 27 . 5/21/2017 A couple of spelling errors I spotted. You have Britain spelled Brittan, and dinner spelled diner. |
TLD110166 chapter 21 . 5/21/2017 You have minute and minutes spelled minuet and minuets in a few places. This is a good story. |