Nice job on this one..but make sure you dont hit anybody whie driving and thinking at the same time..heck, walking and thinking at the same time is dangerous

OH! Nice and dark and evil and full of death and morbid happiness... _ I've said it before, and I'll say it again, I LOVE THAT DOUBLED LINE AT THE END! 'She was dead, and soon he would be... She was dead, and soon he would be...' It hits home beautifully. Events moved quickly; kind of interesting to see such a large plot in hindsight like this. I think it would make a great chapter fic. But as always, awesome writing! Come up with another one soon!

Dude, that so sucks to be them. o.o Awesome job, as usual!

Oh that was sad... It's depressing seeing all of that guilt lying on Jeremie's shoulders. It shouldn't be his fault, even though in a way it is, but we don't like to think that huh? So...everyone's dead. woah. sad, but you're such a great writer, and I have to be happy that you've writen another wonderful one-shot.

That was so frecking sad but so frecking good. Poor Jeremie. Everyone is dead..wah! Ah, well, what can you do...It was still awesome. Keep writing

Wow1 almost than that i pretty much loved it. excpt for the fsct that they all died. but then again you hafta have a time when there is a defeat... first of this kind i have read. very good

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I feel sorry for Jeremy. Nobody should have to have that kind of decision on their hands, and then to make the wrong choice makes it even worse.

Excellent job, as usual.

Wow, I uh really don’t know what to say. This was good, really good. Sometimes we need to read something as sad as this to get some perspective in our life. But wow, you must have been having some day to think of something like this while you were driving.

A bad day huh? You must have some crappy ass day's to make someting as good yet as sad as this. Perfect grammar, solid plot (even for a one shot) and a good mood set. Unlike yesterday's oneshot, this one filled in all the gaps. 10/10.

You never cease to amaze me with your brilliant work. It brought a few tears to my eyes. I loved it!