Reviews for Epic Sitch: The Spirit Dance Files
derek chapter 1 . 6/5/2019
kim saying to ron i have four yearsof not seeing you as bf material to make up for
simplyshelbs16 chapter 1 . 9/9/2018
one of your few works I don't remember reading but omg was it adorable! I needed some good kp fluff that wasn't written myself to read tonight after feeling under the weather!
Whovianeverlark17 chapter 1 . 6/26/2018
this is great, and they're all in character, too. loved it! (especially the ending)
Guest chapter 1 . 1/6/2018
AWESOME
Bobtrumpet chapter 1 . 11/11/2016
I can't believe I never got around to reviewing the majority of your stories that I have read and enjoyed. This is one that I have read several times and it has never failed to delight. Everything is just spot on.
unusedaccount1337 chapter 1 . 8/1/2013
Best linchpin ever... About the closet with Ron and Kim...
FERNANDE5 chapter 1 . 2/7/2013
Another good 1
Jess D chapter 1 . 10/17/2012
Finally gave this story a try and read it, gotta say, even thought it was un-intentional... it was well worth the wait. If you still write Kim Possible fics, I can't wait to see what else you got in store for us readers. And if not, I'm looking forward to reading the rest of the KP stories and what else I'll find your author's page.
Kmsiw101 chapter 1 . 10/8/2012
Aww cute story. I'm glad I all of a sudden got in a Kim Possible mood. Sigh memories
Anthony1l chapter 1 . 10/8/2012
This story is hilarious, interesting, original, touching, and unique.
Daki92 chapter 1 . 6/6/2011
Not a favorite but it deserves a review. Interesting story
Sentinel103 chapter 1 . 9/30/2009
James T, I can not believe that I haven't reviewed this before. Actually I am working on a new story and I wanted to make sure that I'm not copying anyone. I know sonebody has done something Like I'm planning on doing (well the beginning anyway) Though, I plan on taking it in a new direction.

Larry (Sentinel 103)
jkrust78 chapter 1 . 9/28/2009
A good one-shot and a good start to your writing career here on .
kp83 chapter 1 . 10/14/2008
So cute! Glad that Kim could make better memories for Ron!
Data Seeker chapter 1 . 9/19/2008
Dear Author

This is a great one shot story. The quality is great. Great dialog, interactions, reactions, humor, a touch of suspense and best of all: romance and emotion!

The characters; particularly Kim and Ron are done very, very well.

The basic plot is good. The original ending of the animated episode (who’s name escapes me), where Kim danced with Josh and Ron was in the closet was funny, but wrong. Humor has its place; but its not the ends all, and to put it first, can ruin a good story.

I like what you where your story starts after Ron is locked up. It was great; Ron is hurt and emotionally drained (I would be) and Kim realizes her mistake and frees Ron and they has an emotional talk. Very profound.

The scene that is in their Junior Year was interesting, and complex with a touch of drama.

The scene in their Senior Year with Kim and Ron dating was sweet, and an dramatic plot twist when they both get shut in the closet, and they get romantic. Some details made me uncomfortable, but it didn’t go too far. Then they are free. SWEET.

This is what I think of the wholesome standards.

The language is clean.

Some details made me uncomfortable (you already knew that). But considering that its T ratted, its pretty good, considering what T ratings are known for. THANKS FOR NOT DOING ANYTHING OFFENSIVE.

No extreme violence or any other vile content.

I hope this review has a good influence on you. God bless.

Data Seeker
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