i love it make more ;)

OMG! I LOVE THIS! *BURSTS INTO LAUGHTER* keeo it up!

I was barely in it aw...funny yet twisted moy hoy hoy ha ha!

If I were in your fan fiction in hedgehog form I would keep on shooting Sonic with a Desert Eagle, so here's mine Character:

Name: Vincent

Gender: Male

Age: 14

Species: Hedgehog

Color: Same as Shadow except the streak is darker red.

Color Eyes: Reddish Brown.

Shoes: Same as Shadow.

Like: Video Game, Guns, knives, andKFC.

Dislike: Sonic, Amy, Charmy. Big, and Eggman.

Friends: Shadow, Rouge, and Espio.

Weapons: Guns, Knives, Ninja Sword, and Grenades.

Side: Good

Cool, but... I'm kinda a BIG BIG BIG Sonic fan... oh well, it was okay, but the swearing put me off a bit

ha ha! this is so funny! update soon!

*sigh* This story is absolutly pathetic! It's so random, so STUPID! And, once more, there are bashings of Sonic. Hate to break it to you, but I LIKE SONIC! He's cool and not gay.

The first thing I notice in this story was the amount of swear words. It made the format look ridiculous. Those swear words are not necessary, nor does it humor the story either. Another thing I noticed was the amount of author's notes in the story. You don't need to tell people you don't like Sonic because we can already see it in your writing. So point taken: leave out the A/N. The large number of characters is a problem too. How are you going to fit each and every character into one story? It's pretty hard if you ask me. And when you introduced the characters it was so plain. When I saw such a long list, the first thing I thought was, "Who the hell are all these characters?" and, "What the hell do these characters even look like?" Put more detail into this story, and describe these characters. It would make this fanfic alot less confusing and you still denied my request to describe Kai better. She still seems like a big black blur to me.

The one part in the story that annoyed me the most was the sugar-high scene. You made the characters sound so retarded, they seem more drunk than hyper. It wasn't even funny; it was just plain stupid! And the confusion between scenes are so ... so ... confusing! At one chapter they're at a party, then the next they're at an amusement park. What the hell? And don't get me wrong about the lack of originality in this story. This story's idea sounds like what any teenage fangirl will write with no depth in thought and only took 10 minutes. It makes the story sounds like you wrote this for the praise of the reviews. This just makes you sound lazy to me.

So to conclude, I did not enjoy this work. Maybe this story would have sounded more witty if you left out the swear words and the high-sugar humor. Just a thought.

hey kai whats up i read your fic it was pretty cool. So um do you know what happened to scorch? he hasnt updated his stories for a few weeks. Anyways i was hoping that you could put my char in the story? PLEASE! if you do his name is Scurge and hes a yellow hedgehog with hair like shadow's but he has blue treaks instead of red ones. Thank YOU!1

Cool. Please let me be in the sequel cause this is so completely random I've got see soon and please review How did you get here?

Good, keep it up!

Nice!

Short, but it's good!

Still funny! Reading more!

Funny!

hey Kai-senpai may-be 4 ur sequel can u put in...well Jayln is gonna be there right?

then can u put in inferno hmm?(4 sequel)

Inferno The Hedgehog

eyes:piercing sapphire blue

fur:he looks like shadow excrpt his streaks are blue.

age:22

rival(s):sonicshadow.

love interst: any girl he can get his hands amy & rouge & cream

everything else like soon