I love this, I'm almost crying!

This is so cute!
Continue making more of these one shots!
Lov Lizzy!

Short, but I like it. I didn't think you could fit that much of a story into a short paragraph.

Again I love it and your a great writer.

I loved it!

Short but good. So thumbs up!

that was so cute and sad

i love it

oh! That was so cute/sad/happy!(Tear falls down cheek)I LOVE it! Keep writing. I'm out

aw how sweet and sad at the same time.

like it. short but i like it. make a HP MR crossover! plz? it'd be awesome and u no it!

OWWMGAY!*sobs* Well, we all know this was going to happen sooner or later.

so sweet

Wow, that was a truly wonderful story! I was almost crying, seriously! Great job!

it always cuts off the last part of my blog, sigh it ends with

i don no y but i feel lik crying. could be that im overly stressed because exams are in a couple days...or, it could be that it is really late...i could be that i have kept my emotions bottled up so long, all it took to release them*sob* was a sad ff. cute, but emotional. nice biuldup to the ending with the whole 'i love him best now.' i like you use of flasbacks, normally i don lik that but it worked for u. also i liked how u made it angle and not, say, nudge. angel,1)was the youngest, therfore the last to grow up, abd the hardest to let go.2)she was maxs favorate.3)she always seemed so young, so the idea of her growing up was bound to mess with max...hope you enjoyed the review,this is the longest i haf eva written. hope i helped you achieve a new level of crative writing...now you can tell im tired when i start talking like dr phil.

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aw how sentimental