Oh, wow. I'm kind of tearing up. This was a great short story! I've always been interested in Crashdown, but there's not much fic about him. This was amazing, though, and even though I've never though of Crash and Cally together, I can see it now. Oh, an dby the way, Crashdown's real name is Alex Quartararo :)

I do not know how I missed this story! I love Cally/Crashdown and I don't rightly know why.

This story is so beautiful and heartbreaking. Also a bit terrifying as I read on, you have such a grasp on the characters, even if Crashdown was only a minor character.

Did you mean to make all those repitions of Cally crouching beside Tyrol? It's in there three times.

Your narrative is lovely too, taunting, almost like the voice inside of his head.

Anyway, this was a great story!

wow. amazing. I am atloss for words, your story is fraking beauiful.

When I finally remember my password, I am defo adding this story to my fave list.

Out of ten?

I would have to give this story a... 20.. no... 100. It's THAT amazing.

COngrats on your talent. And I hope you would write more of Cally and Crashdown pairing.

Amazing.

Wow.

A very innovative pairing coupled with an intense, yet gently pleasing, storyline. What a winner.

I've always liked the character of Cally, and have toyed with the idea of expounding upon her... But honestly the show hasn't given us that much at all to work with. I'd appreciate it if she had more screen-time, but, like you said, she's always just to the left of the spotlight.

An all-around outstanding fic this is. I'll be keeping an eye on you.

This is amazing. Extremely well written, and I loved that someone finally played out that dynamic. I thought that Fragged was such an intese episode. Great story, you should write another one.

I usually don't go for romances, but I really enjoyed reading this one. :)