Reviews for Flowers in her hair
CATlin chapter 58 . 7/14/2010
This is by far the best story i have ever read it was a wonderful story it was absoulutley the best thing ive ever read thank you for writting this
TeamPapaya chapter 58 . 4/7/2010
i havnt reviewed before now but i really enjoyed reading this story it was written greatly and it was funny and sad and scary but all in all it was fantastic:L
tryntee13 chapter 58 . 1/25/2010
I know this story is almost 2 1/2 years old. But it was brilliant through and through. You have a true talent to grab your reader and keep them in the moment. I couldn't stop reading and I hope you continue to keep writing.
emmy1124 chapter 58 . 8/15/2008
You know, this was on my story alert...I think. I KNOW I read about half or a little more at first. I realized since I favorited this, I hadn't read all of it. So I just did. It was spectacular. ALL of it. I'm so sorry for all the hardships you went through during this story. I had a bad couple years a while back, too. Uncle, Hurricane Katrina (she ate my house, my job, my car...), grandmother, and then 21 year old cousin (heart attack)...all in about two years. So I feel your pain. I hope you are doing better.

Now, on to the story. It was real. The whole thing. You did an amazing job, your writing is superb. Your spelling was off a bit, but I'm just anal like that. I knew what words you were using and mentally corrected them in my head. So...I would love to check out more of your work, and hope they impress me as much as this did. :)

-Emily
Girl of Light Writer chapter 58 . 6/20/2008
this is such an amazing story. a tale of the transformation and trials of two people and how life seems to get in the way as they find themselves and love. good job. perfect.
emmy1124 chapter 1 . 2/12/2008
This is great so far. I stumbled across it. I hope you don't take this as a flame. I would never put someone down that I didn't know. Since you said you have dyslexia, maybe you should find someone to read your work for you before it's published. Your grammar is not that bad, and it's mostly misspellings. The plot, however, is so good, that you just kinda bypass the words! I'm on chapter 10, now, I think, and look forward to a relaxing day of reading (had a major dental procedure yesterday...I'm not getting off the couch!)
EternlSrvtude chapter 18 . 12/21/2007
chapter 18 u said was awful but ITS NOT !

RIGHT ON

ur gr8
EternlSrvtude chapter 6 . 12/19/2007
I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT

LUV IT

LUV It

LUV

IT

ps its definitely not "defiantly"

yasmin
CaNdY-FlOsS-07 chapter 58 . 12/7/2007
I know its a bit late ( Cough Cough) but i totally lovve this story and you are an amazing author!

Nuff Luv

CaNdY-FlOsS

x-x-x
aden mourningstar chapter 1 . 11/6/2007
I thought it was a good chapter, yoou just need to watch switching in between tenses. There were a couple of places where u switched back and forth from first to third person. But other than that I can't wait to read more! .
steven chapter 1 . 10/21/2007
reading the first page i like it but really i liek just about anyhting about harry potter and stuff liek that but i just finshed the 7th book so i i kno what ure talking about if i hadnt i wouldnet even kno the hell ure tlaking about lol any way i liek so keep up the good work
raka chapter 1 . 10/20/2007
Hey! I've just read the epilogue of flowers in her hair. it's great! those who dont wanna read it, you should ask them to, cause this is the perfect ending, i wish j.k rowling,s story had this ending. And by the way, i read the whole story thi month, whole of it together. i was really wishing that j.k rowling would finally show malfoy as everyone's friend, and that ron and hermione would have lots of children. but as a H.P fan, you must have already read 'the deathly hallows' and know th epilogue, it disappointed me a bit. but don't think i didnt like the book, it was great. anyway, back to your story. it was more fantastic than i would have imagined! wish i could write like you. can you please send the names of other H.P fanfics you have written, or planning to write? i'll read and review for all of them, i promise! i couldnt send review for any chapters because of some personal problems, so sory. i'm from bangladesh, where are you from? and can you tell me your full name? if you dont mind?
dancerrdw chapter 58 . 10/6/2007
aww i am sad it is over but i loved it i hope you keep writing and i will read...like i said i really liked this a lot :D
quidditch7 chapter 58 . 10/5/2007
You went above and beyond in this chapter..I mean, this chapter was one of the best written things I've ever read from you.

Oh my goodness...I was absolutely bawling during this chapter..I have turned from composed to an emotional wreck over the 15 minutes it took me to read this chapter. wow..from the fact that Ron thought of his father and how he is still present (which were some of my favorite few lines of this chapter)...to Hermione seeing Ron and loving him so much ("He was her Ron, and right now her inner urge was to get to him, to belong to him in every last way, because every hero no matter how small needs a damsel in distress to tame him of his childish ways and to love him for him.") ah that line was purely amazing, to FLOWERS (the daisy he put) IN HER HAIR (oh my goodness..I was crying my head off at that part..I've never been so impressed with the tying in of the title to a story in my whole life...I know it was mentioned way earlier in the story also..but that was just wow..beyond amazing), to Mrs. Weasley giving Ron and Hermione her and Arthur's wedding bands...and then the closing lines...Oh my

goodness.

I am so unbelievably sad this story is over...I was lucky enough to read it for 2 years and I'm just so sad its over. But at the same time I am absolutely thrilled with the way this story turned out, it was just...wow...I can't even explain it. But you have talent and I do hope you continue writing.

I'm going to be totally honest with you...I think you should leave the story where it is. I love it and of course want more, you know that, but I think that this story is perfect being left where it is (without an epilogue). There's no need to answer all of our questions..I like knowing that Ron and Hermione love each other so much and they can do whatever they want now..but not knowing exactly what they do makes the ending all the more magical (that's why I enjoyed the epilogue of Deathly Hallows- because it was open ended.) So yes that's my opinion...don't add anything to this story and for goodness sakes don't change anything haha. Maybe you can work on "Out of the Shadows" now.

But wow..thank you SO much for the opportunity to read this story...I loved reading and reviewing it and your nice replies to my reviews along the way.

I honestly had about 15 favorite quotes but I picked my top three:

1(Hermione traced the scars on his hand with her thumb as she listened; he was committed to her. He had never given up hope; he had never left her side. He had stood by her when no other would and faced down the darkness that was despair and pain to be with her; he was matured more than even she would like to admit. Of the love she had met she had no regrets.)

2(He was aware of no one else but her as the dark that had crept upon them dawned on him for the first time. This was a place of first, the first time that they had kissed the first time that he had realised that he loved her so deeply that the thought of her not being their killed him inside.)

3(He watched her walking over to her mother as the lights from the fairies danced on her now completely ruined hair, and he couldn't think of any moment that’s he had loved her more, or when she looked more perfect then when she had flowers in her hair.)

Anyway..great job, I can't wait to read more of your writings :)

-quidditch7
quidditch7 chapter 57 . 10/5/2007
Aw! Yay..what a funny and heartwarming chapter.

I love that last few lines about Hermione decided that marrying today is just as good as any other day..and then the line about Tonks and "the ever-loyal" Charlie...seriously just amazing.

Great job and I apologize for the late review.

-quidditch7
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