here's what i think should happen if you continue this. venom breaks out on his own and searches peter's house deciding that it would either bond to peter or may, whichever it finds 1st. he finds may first so it bonds to her with the idea of taking over her. however spider-girls good nature influences venom and eventualy he decideds to simply help spidergirl. andd then the story ends until someone comes up with another idea

Really nice story so far, I like your way of writing.

I hope we will see spider-mzn with the symbiote at last .

Cool, so far! The writing style is different. Short, sweet, and to the point! I can't wait to see what happens next!