Long chapter is long. Could probably be broken up slightly. The glossary is certainly handy.

Hmm... I noticed that Ataru isn't mentioned since chapter 1... and that there's only 3 chapters here. This is a very nice story, but only 3 chapters?

As a whole, you are a good author. The Ishinomaki Years, as I understand it, is a sequel to The Senior Year, and like most sequels, it is lacking in comparison to the original. While it is enjoyable and wacky enough in it's own way, it is simply lacking compared to your original work.

Where is the rest of the fic and where is UY-20YL?

Wah!

-; Where's the rest of the chapters!

It's interesting to see the differences between this and the original version. This is better, and the characterizations are a lot clearer.

This is *extremely* hard to understand since UY-TSY isn't up here and I can't find it on the net. Nonetheless, you have a *very* complicated fanfic, something certainly better than a lot of other drivel one could mention. But please continue.