Well. That was deep in the feels.
I don't even care if the way Rin died wasn't even canon, I feel you dug into their characters well. I always thought Rin would've eventually been fed up with Kakashi's indifferent, cold self-destructive ways but we're never really shown that so good job on your behalf.

This is intesely beautiful in the way you wrote. So much unspoken emotion between the two - it just makes their relationship seem all the more unusual and special. A nostalgic, moving little fanfiction. I love your characterisation of Kakashi especially. Thanks.

This was beautiful.

The fluency and flow was amazing, it worked with the sequencing. The subtle actions and angst lingering in the air. I just loved it.

- CM

I'm sorry, but i really don't like how you wrote Kakashi in this...I don't really think he would be the type to cut just because he can and the fact that his father died doesn't affect him much in the series. And what's even worse is that, even though people don't know that much about her, Rin is described as a very kind and caring person and would not just leave Kakashi like that.

I'm sorry if this seems like a flame..it's not...i'm just really tired of people making Kakashi a cutter and Rin all heartless like that..i don't know if you know this, but people put these kinds of stories on here all the time. They screw around with Kakashi and Rin and they don't even act like how they would...I'm just REALLY REALLY TIRED OF THOSE STORIES!

Wow. That story was so deep, for lack of a better word. It's amaizing.

Beautiful

*cries and faves*

Hey, I love your story and your a great writer. I was wondering if you take requests. If you do, can you write a story about Kakashi and Ino because I've never seen one of those. I would myself but I don't really know the Naruto show that well and I don't want to make a mistake. So if you can please write back at and tell me what te story is called. Thanks a bunch.

Ja ne!

Yoko

wow that was beautiful!

At first i thought it was sakura and naruto and when i found out it was rin i was like woah ok.

wait did u tell me it was rin in the summary?

what ever. Anyway that was a work of art and im shocked (and apalled) that it doesnt have like 30 reviews.

That was so beautiful...*cries*...I hope you write more stories, because you're a wonderful writer who can capture emotions like I never can in a story. I can only write poems, and those don't get much attention in a fanfiction website...

that was depressing but really good, i loved it!

Beautiful...So sad...But so asolutely gorgeous...You write a wonderfully unfeeling Kakashi...

Great Job! Looking forward to reading more of your work! -

...Wow. That's sad. Really sad.

It's very nice for a first attempt; Kakashi IS really difficult to write. _

Congratulations on a job well-done!