Wow, I like how it works in both ways and shows Haru's regret *tackles him* I adore Haru so much personally. Nice diction and emotion, fantastic work.

~Myst

Excellent! Like Shadow, I haven't read that far in the series...does haru really turn his back on akito? *shakes head* Hyu...

Anyway, excellent writing. I love the 'God' quote too!

this a beautifully writen story. i love the line "Bitter irony is not lost that the word 'God' has become synonymous with failure and pain." awesome.

Whoa. Masterfully written and full of complexities I cannot begin to ponder. (See? I can use big words too!)

But seriously, VERY good. What I liked most was the creative and orginal style this story was written in. And the idea was very unique-most people don't see Haru as having a major role, so it's nice to have a little variety every now and then.

Keep up the GRR-ATE work! And that's supposed to be spelled wrong, because it's like Tigger from Winnie-the-Pooh says and...yeah. I'm going to go now.

Audley Just Leaving

*wide eyed* my first reaction when I finished reading this was simply- wow. This is one of those fics that is deceptively short but that packs a mighty punch in its few words. Spoiler wise I haven't gotten that far in the series and thus did not understand a few things but this story was still amazing!