Ugh, I hate, hate, HATE those Marauders. Arrogant bullying toe-rags with a brain the size of a peanut and the emotional capacity of a grain of salt. I'm sick of people worshiping Gryffindors. I'm Slytherin, and proud of it!

It is no wonder Severus hates the sight of Harry when he has been tormented like that by James all through his school years.
Great little ficlet. Very plausible and well written.

I myself like HufflePuffs

Absolutely wonderful writing, right here. Your imagery was excellent, and your use of bolding words like you did helped add to the emotion. Well done.

I'm a bit of a Severus/Lily shipper myself, so the beginning of this story amused me greatly. ;) Go you.

Wonderful job!

I love it! i hope you'll continue writing Harry Potter fanfic!

My eyes were full of tears when I read this. Such a sad story...*sniff*

Bloody brilliant! I wish it were longer though. GO SLYTHERINS!

At first I thought that it was Hermione you were writing about, until i saw "clear emerald eyes". P I like whole bold lettering thing. Poor ickle Snivvy Snivelly Snivellus! I'll be expecting a sequel for this, and you're gonna make one, whether you like it or not.

Let me try to sum this up and get straight to the point.

More. Now. Please?