Haha nice!

Short, nicely written, and a nice idea.

I liked it! ::

This is ridiculously awesome. Best Red Eye fic I've ever read.

Loved that last line. ;) Short and to the point. Great characterization.

Oh poor Jackson!I guess that he'll never underestimate a skirt and heels .And I suppose that Jackson has never heard of 'Fight or Flight'either,huh? :)

A bit late in the day for a review but your prose in this piece is exceptional.

Not many RE fics centre on an overlooked aspect of the movie, viz, that Lisa fought back. She had an outsiders's chance, and as you aptly phrased it, being on guard around her seemed a 'frivolous waste'.

Plus, you've illustrated the simple rule that less is more.

Nice work.

Awesome. This is a popular topic/sentiment but you wrote it in a very unique way. I love how direct it was, and your voice definitely stands out amongst other writers. By the way, I'm always impressed when someone can write a story as short as this, and still say everything that needs to be said. Great job. Oh, and the ending was fabulous. It made me smile.

ROFLCOPTER.

That's about all I can manage at this interval.

It is past my bedtime.

"Jackson Rippner was at a bit of a loss for words."

A bit? LMAO, great, uh, not really a story, but great...drabble? I dunno, great whatever it is.

"a hidden violent streak in her was as unexpected and inappropriate as a sneeze in a cathedral."

an unexpected and amusing metaphor. (please keep writing! if not this, then anything.)

Very good. Lisa definitely threw a curveball at Jackson in the movie, didn't she?

Hee! This was a great one-shot exploring his mind and motivations. Some of the lines in here were quite brilliant, such as:

Beneath the layers and years of suburban indolence and glutinous satisfaction was a fiery well of strength, an ancient resource that would remain untapped until the keen press of peril made defensive action an urgent necessity.

And it is quite true that he underestimated her.

I love dark humour! Great piece of work! Funny but dark and creepy. And honey, I know this sounds old but the last line was so- priceless :). Hope to have more from you.

Absolutely stupendous! But then again, so is all of your righting! The way you right, the words flow together more smoothly then water! Just the exact right amount of everything to make a perfect Red Eye story! Oh, and I was wondering, I have a new Red Eye story out, and I was wondering if maybe you could look over it, just to see if I got Jackson’s attitude right. (I have a tendency to try to make the bad guys not so bad for the sake of their love interest and none of my beta readers have seen Red Eye yet.) Oh, and another thing; I am looking for some good Edgar Alan Poe pomes that are about 7 minutes long. I am doing speech and debate this year and signed up for the Interpretation event of poetry and need some serious poems to present to the judges. And since you like Poe so much, I thought you would be the perfect person to ask. Thank you for all of your wonderful help and once again, this was a spectacular Red Eye story.

Love,

Celia

I loved this story. It was undoubtly awesome! I had been reading this, and- well thinking of the movie and whatnot, and then the look on his face when he was stabbed by the pen- and you got it.

Great. Excellent. Love it.