This is an awful storie PS I LOVE EO THX FOR RUINING THAT

I absolutely loved the end of chapter two. I hope you adding another chapter isn't just wishful thinking on my part.

This is fantastic!

Fricken awesome.

That is all.

OH! ] You have to finish this!

Um. This isn't a character death fic is it? I hope not. I love this pairing!

Great job!

Whew! Good! I hope if you write more to this you don't add in the usual "hospital bed-side" scene where Elliot tells Olivia that he loves her and vice versa. That has just been done too many times. What you have here is brilliant though- beautifully written. :) :) :)

Hope you continue. Really enjoying it so far.

You really need to update this. It;s so good. Dont let it go!

Wow I love the way you wrtie! keep going PLEASE! :)

This is the MOST BEAUTIFUL story i've every read... and i don't just mean on here, like EVER! Truly beautiful...Thank you

Sophie xx (PS if you couldn't dicipher that i liked it! - a lot!)

Elliot can't die without knowing how Liv feels about him!

Wow. Just wow. Your prose is amazing. I adore this story-even the angst, which I am quite the fan of when used correctly (like here). Great job. :D

hmm... well somewhat confusing at times, but... overall pretty good. im impressed by the way you've come up with a more original idea, and i hope there's more to come from this. (just a hint, you might want to cut down on the commas, make new sentences instead.) -Vj

is he dead? NO! don't make elliot die, that would be evil! plz up-date.