Great job

I was already angry at you for making the kyubis story that long, but when you used "Arashi", I was done. Why do people even use that name? It's freaking Minato Namikaze, not Arashi Kazama. I may be bitching but damn, where the fuck do people get that name from.

I'm curious, what does the suffix, -kun, mean?

Im scared for narutos safty now if tentens dad is the one teaching him.

your story is very good im hooked cant wiat for more! :) at the begining i thought that it was kind of insubstantial other than that i cant say that there were really any noticeable flaws. sorry if that was useless but i thought i should say what i thought.

AWESOME STORY! PELASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASE CONTINUE!

love it!

Update! Update! Update! xD Wonderful story so far i can't wait to read what happens next.

Oh shit! Naruto is in trouble! Isn't tentens dad the guy who beat him with a club

Hm, interesting demon history. Definitely original. I like the story so far. You have some grammar/spelling mistakes, but nothing major, so it's okay. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens with Naruto and evil Tenten's father...

love this fic! will naruto hide his strength and graduate early from the academy or play up his idiot act? Hm... please update!

Great chapter and story so fair pleaces continue the story soon.

how sad a good story that won't update truly a sin against the world

thou has passed the test to go into my favorites

Good job it rocks.