this was as excellent as Worlds Collide. Brilliant writing, fantastic storyline. A great read.

I loved the sequel! I'll admit that I'd love to see that list of 'essential things to take with you if you're moving to a medieval society'. I think the only real thing I could come up with was feminine hygiene products. The ending was lovely and bittersweet and I cried. At work. Fuck you too lol. I remember thinking as I was reading through it,'gee, she cries a lot.' But really, she's pretty well justified for tears. You were not kind to her in this one, though things worked out. I loved how she and Gwena clashed. Thanks for your hard work, it was an interesting read!

Thank you

As before a marvellous story. So clever with Jaelle coping with a permanent life in "real" Valdemar.
NOT happy however with the ending - losing her memories seems to me to be a poor reward for all she went through.

I don't know if you still look up your old reviews but I didthoroughly reading this again.

Very well written, excellent story. BUT. The end makes me want to vomit. And I really wish I hadn't read it. De fact suicide is not an appropriate reward for all Jaelle went thru; she might as well have been murdered and be done with it.

The first story worlds collide, catches the read interest and make you want to read more, the second part worlds apart together both form a very different type of Valdemar story.

A most enjoyable story and good fun al told a very nice read

I look forward to reading more of your work,

Thank you for sharing your story’s

I just read Worlds Collide and Worlds Apart back to back, and drat you, you still have a knack for making me cry.

Very weel done! (Sorry trying to talk like a griffon!) lol. Keep up the good work and I look forward to more!

That would have been my response exactly! Oh Bloody Hell is right!

This isn't makingg any sense to me lol its confusing me like big time!

I cried too. Even after a few years later your fic is still getting reviewed. :)

Thanks for the awesome contribution to fanfiction.

Where else can I find your work?

DDEC ~ Liz

this was a great story, although i'm glad i found it after it was finished and didnt have to wait two years :)

in your authors note in chapter 18 you mention that kero and eldan are not lifebonded, i always thought that they were. remember they were in mind to mind contact most of those years apart, although kero thought it was a dream, and i believe it is mentioned somewhere in there that they are lifebonded.

This may have already told to you but Kero and Eldan actually are lifebonded *rolls eyes* Don't ask WHERE exactly in By The Sword it gets stated (my mother claims it was on pg 492) I have no idea. And I combed that book with a mental fine tooth comb. Still drives me nuts to this day.

Good stories, I enjoyed reading them both _

I like how it ended. And thanks for the answer to my question at the end. WEll I guess I have to give you that one...Though I thought Kero lifebonded to Eldan. *shrugs* I need to go reread that book anyways. So I loved the story and wished it didn't have to end. Hopefully I'll gave more time to get back to fanfiction reading.