Reviews for Mist
minerrvas chapter 1 . 10/28/2014
Quite certainly one of the saddest fics I've ever read, and unbelievably well written! The last sentence was like a nasty hit - it left me kind of dizzy and shocked, as if I'd comprehended just by then what this fic is about, as well as close to tears.

Thanks for sharing this with us!
Guest chapter 1 . 8/31/2012
Very sad, but quite beautiful.
IvyWize chapter 1 . 12/2/2006
That was... that was... *wipes away tear* lovely. Power to the pen, or a pen - yours. Good job.

-Ivy
Aphelionite chapter 1 . 10/22/2006
Wow. This was SO sad! And the last line just stabbed me through the heart. “He would have traded an eternity of loneliness for Minerva McGonagall to never find her way into the mist.” I swear you are going to be the death of me with your sad fics. I’ll read the next one and my head will just explode – you must be good!
aelurus chapter 1 . 12/23/2005
That was fascinating. It was nice how you made it clear that Dumbledore was dead, but didn't say it outright. Excellent stuff.
SherbetKitty chapter 1 . 9/25/2005
Aww, that was so sweet! Well done!

SherbetKitty
carpediem99 chapter 1 . 9/15/2005
Sorry, i'm not logged in. LOVE this one-shot. Being able to read your material again makes it worth losing my school, house, and everything I've ever known since I was born. (I live near New Orleans, and even though our hose has minimal damage we're packing up and never going back.
BansheeGirl chapter 1 . 9/10/2005
Yikes. Deep. I liked all the stuff about loneliness and whatnot, though. I do indeed think that you captured Dumbledore's dilemma of being such a lonely man very well. Well done.
gahhMinerva chapter 1 . 9/9/2005
Wow... this was beautifully written. Great job, I liked this a lot.
Alesia G chapter 1 . 9/8/2005
This has to be one of the best after life fics I have read. It is very sad in a way but I can't help but take some solace in the knowledge they are together, even if it is in the Mist.

I gather you set the Mist up to be a type of purgatory. A place for people who committed suicide or sacrificed themselves unnecessarily.

I have added it to my favorites list.
Child-of-the-Dawn chapter 1 . 9/8/2005
D00d...thats really good stuff right there...sad, and a good idea of what love and death are like...so very good!
goddess of darkness3 chapter 1 . 9/8/2005
very sad, very sweet, and very well written.
Palanfanaiel chapter 1 . 9/8/2005
I'm shocked speechless.. In a positive way, of course. ) This is greatly written, leaving me all soppy and sad, but still too marvel at your very fantastic story.

LOVE IT!

Pal
Jestana chapter 1 . 9/8/2005
Damn you! You made me cry! *sniffle*
Laughing Siren chapter 1 . 9/8/2005
aww that was very beautiful yet so dark and eerie i love it!
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