this was just weird , a little sad, but more of confusing then sad

this was just weird , a little sad, but more of confusing then sad

Wow... This actually made me cry. Beautiful.
Your writing is very powerful - thank you for sharing.

Sadness...

I hate you for making love a fanfic where my favourite pairing is so sad...
Go die you Black Organisation.

This is so so sad, I really was crying, especially towards the end when they were reunited! Wonderful story! My poor babies ;_;

Death to the Organization - I hate you all.

Awwww! I nearly cried at the end. Why do your stories always make me feel happy and sad at the exact same time? It's confusing!

On one hand, I feel horrible for Heiji and Kazuha who had to wait so long to be together.

On the other, Kazuha DID wait for him, and now they're together. And #$%, I feel like crying and smiling right now. Again. You're really good at inciting emotions with your writing. Keep it up.

Woman. I am drowning in my own tears this minute! And it's all because of YOU! I DON'T USUALLY CRY, YOU KNOW!

I absolutely loved your Fanfiction!

Though it makes me feel bad, I actually enjoyed reading the depressing angsty-ness of this story.

Your writing is really good. I was sort of scared that your writing was horrible and that you'd entirely butcher Heiji's death, but you soon proved me wrong. Good work!

I think Gin enjoys killing too much to wait. I had to be someone else to want Heiji to turn around or close his eyes. Gin seems like the kind a guy that would prefer to watch the death. I sound sick don't I? I think the end was sweet, kinda reminded me of the end of Titanic when Rose reunited with Jack...or did you do that on purpose? Well, it was a sad but sweet story, and Conan most likely tore the Black Org apart after this.

So Sad T.T

I dont imagine heiji dying

You're such a good writer u know

Um .. one question .. what does " Owari " mean ?

THANX

Heiji~! No~! *sob* Poor Shinichi... and Kazuha-chan too! *sniffle*

Good fic though! Even if it was sad...

topaz-tantei

This was certainly not what I was expecting, but it is brilliant nonetheless. I feel sorry for Heiji, he didn't deserve to die. Still, this piece reminds us all that it's not all fun and games, as we so easily forget.

The idea of Heiji being a target since he's somehow always, one way or another, connected with Shinichi had been running through my head since the twelfth of forever.

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Glad it's been put on paper (or well, internet.)

now that that's said...

*breaks down sobbing*

HEIJI! YOU DIED!