Ok.

Lovely.

Thank you for sharing this. I hope you continue to develop your talent.

I’m curious as to why you chose to make Blaise a female :)

Loved it! Can't wait to read more!

Thanks I was supposed to go to sleep after this chapter cause its like 6 in the morning but not I can't because SOMEONE decided to put an amazing cliff hanger lol beautiful work by the way!

Hi.
Just started your fic', and I must confess : I didn't expect that. I was afraid that the scenario would be too obvious at the start, and tot quick, but you've succeed to make the story very interesting, giving information bit by bit.
Well, that's very surprising and interisting !

Actually, after reading some other reviews I have decided to quit and use the time constructively. I don't like leaving negative reviews, so I'll just say that there is plenty of room for improvement.

This is my second attempt at reading this. Hopefully I can skim past the teenage angst, bad poetry, guitar playing, gratuitous swearing, Americanisms, Hermione's perspective going from third person to first person and back again and find a story hidden in here. Time to tackle another chapter...

Ughh... I give up. I can't read anymore of this.

This story seems to have way better spelling and grammar on .

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I wonder why Hermione doesn't tell her head of house - and, if that doesn't work, Dumbledore. After all, she's not in the wrong, and there are ways to find the truth. It feels a bit too constructed so Harry can appear as a White Knight after the fact. Might have been better if he appeared to break such an act up.

I don't get why Harry would be away from his family as a Quidditch player - he can apparate or floo or even portkey to work and back, no matter where in the UK he works. The view of his parents towards art and Mmusic though likely is correct - given the small size of the wizard population it's likely he'd need a rich patron to make money, or be the best there is in his field.

Playstation 2? Really AU indeed. Draco and Ron act so much out of character, they might as well be original characters. I think it would have been better if the reason Hermione is hated is that she is a muggleborn, not because of some family feud normal People generally don't care about anymore.