so sad. . .

great story, anyway

Wow, that was really deep! Good work :)

Good story, kind of odd though, but than again, I tend to like the more odd stories.

Beautiful. Just... beautiful. Really. There is nothing else to be said. This is an extraordinary little ficlet. Thank you. Thank you SO much for making my day!

Wow. I am overwhelmed.

That was a very moving, very beautiful examination of a character for whom it is hard to have any sympathy. It brought me right up to the verge of pity, if not all the way over the edge into sympathy.

...and I now have to go and grab my Watchman trade and re-read, for I never even thought about it while watching The Incredibles (which I also was rather taken with).

Thanks for the story.