that was bloody hilarious. I love the bit where ginny's shirt changes mysteriously- it's so true!

that was so funny! I love the sarcasm you use when you say 'because the writer thinks ...' etc.

Oh, that was SO funny :D Can you write more of those? Is "the Dursley's" with the apostrophe in the wrong place also a cliché?

Hey! Very funny story! Keep it up, update soon!

I really had a laugh reading it! Very goog the Harry and Snape and the sensitive Draco thing!Keep it up!

Hee hee hee

Lol that was so hilarious! Yet, very, very random.

And a major change from the usual angstyness

Loved it

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thanks for the good laugh!

(I absolutely hate clichés too, even if I probably wrote some)

So what does Hermione do now?

I absolutely adore how authors make fun of the cliches in fanfictions! It's funny! ** Not what I expect, so that's a good thing! ** Liked it, and I hope you have many laughs in the present and future! ** Keep up the great work!

Well... that was... enlightening... not, of course, that I haven't heard it all before, but... well, then. D

Yours sincerely,

the Queen of Duct Tape

This is great. Thanks for submitting this to my C2!

OMG! If I had not read some of your other fics first (which I read and did not review even though I liked them- take it as a compliment that I wanted to keep reading what you wrote before I took a break to review) I would have thought you were a terrifically horrible writer. As it is, I was laughing really really hard as it is a compilation of many of the stereotypes in HP fanfiction (including bad writing). If you do ever continue this, don't forget the age-old battle where both boys are madly in love with hermione and either duke it out for her or she chooses one and breaks the other one's heart and he has to go cry and then find someone else in the next few sentences.

It was an excellent laugh! It's really sad how some people don't seem to possess any semblance af a sense of humour. Otherwise, there would be a lot more fics like this and I could spend all of my new found time laughing hysterically.

This is hilarious! I love all the little parts that the author inserted like "the author then decides" and stuff like that. It's great!

Allychik6

It was...different. And funny too! ** But if you have more ideas, then I encourage you to write another chappie! Or chappies! **