dude put more chapters youtry to give it an exciting ending but you don't not meaning to be rude but really you need to put more it really got interesting then you ended it

UPDATE! I hate stories that are great, and then the authors leave at a cliffhanger and never update! It's magnificent so far! Keep it up!

Hi, um, your story is really bad. I couldn't understand what was going on, like when shadow appeared out of nowhere, flash suddenly regaining his head, tails being shot, it's all unclear. 2/10

Anice realistic.I hope you update soon.

Oh, yeah... two little kids... what do THEY know about romance? You. Fucking. Suck. Period.

freaky dude...the experiments should add suspence...you know im actually supposed to be doing an english assignment now but im reading your fic in stead...oh and i added manics ultimate adventure to the c2...KTW

OMGOMGOMG WHATS GONNA HAPPEN?

Okay... a few questions... you weren't online...

1) Terrible father from Vinny's past? I created a terrible father! Wah!

2) Anyway, in your profile, it says my birthday is BEFORE ZA's? Well, the DAY and MONTH, maybe... but... did you happen to mention that HIS is 5 YEARS before mine?

3) Your b-day is June 15?

hmm...this story's going somewhere, keep it up, i like all tailsxcream fics...dunno why...i just do...end of story.

...i was thinking u were gonna say 'why do i keep asking questions i know the answer to?' CAUSE THATS MY LINE! lol. anywyay, good chapter. Oh ya...Gahlik's age is 16. Oh, and Gahlik nad Ghost can do a team maneuver. (did i spell that right) Anyway, Gahlik picks up Ghost and throws him at the enemy. along with being hit, Ghost climbs all over the victim licking him so Gahlik can attack without the enemie's noticing.

OH NO TALIS!. uh i still love the story and i give you a 10/10 and i made a new chapter to that story make more soon

Flash is cool!

THE POWER OF VOODOO OWNZ ALL! lol, no suggestions here, writers block as well.

um... abit confusing...can you please read me story i just made it...its called Manic's Ultimate Adventure...see ya next chappy

um thank you for the rev you gave me. Um i just added a new chapter...you can use my chacter he is Tails older borther Rei is his name...you can use any of them...grate story...keep going...for a few i chold not see the 2 chapter...i'm calling my lil cuz soon i'll tell her about your story. I love it please make more soon!