Very, very nice writing style... almost epic and fast, but with a lot of emotion. Add more to this story!

Very nicely done. Well explained, and good spelling/grammer. I liked the way you went through her thoughts from being Astronema, to the Pink Galactic Ranger and so on.

It was sad at the end, but still very well done. Keep up the awesome job!

wow. cool. a long and complex story, but good. it was good. that thing with kai... i've seen karone and leo and karone and carlos, but never karone and kai... never thought about them as a couple, hmm... anyway, i'm glad to see that she ended up with zhane in the end - always thought they belonged together! :P anyway, loved it!