I very much enjoy this story. I hope you are still intending to finish! Good luck!

Dearest Writer,

Your story has been long awaited! I've not had the luck to have stumbled upon a decently sized story of this type on , though I've been searching a long while. I do not typically read works which are not complete, as so many never achieve that status... so it was a bit of a leap of faith for me to embark on your story. I hope you've found help finishing, as I eagerly await the conclusion :)

Just letting you know readers are still lurking out here in the wide world, on edge and anticipating more!

All the best,

So and so

(I would be remiss if I did not mention, your writing would be improved by working in scene changes into your actual text instead of simply supplying a bold header. Ex "... and so bran settled in to write prose about his crush. Meanwhile... I'm sure you can find more (better) examples of this. :) Otherwise, I like!)

Ciao, Aniyu! Excuse me for not reviewing... well, anything. I feel awful. Instead of spending time on fanfiction, I joined a few clubs, lived through Junior Year, Debated nationally, and went to Europe for a month. XD You grammar has improved tremendously(huzza), and the content of this chapter was very well written, more so then the original. Something I noticed, however, was the choppiness of the sections. While this is longer then usual, and the parts are good, the transitions need to be smooth, unless abrupt is the feeling you want for the scene. Again, sorry for not responding earlier! Great job!

I love this story!

D': So sad! But I liked it, like I knew I would. If Will dies I will cry ;_; Good chapter. Angsty but good 3

*Turns to Will* "Can I borrow this?" (meaning Silverlode)

*Takes sword*

Hehehehehehehe

*Pokes Simon repeatedly through the pile of hay bales with the pointy end of the sword*

*Turns away and begins building giant machine that will bring torture and torment to Simon for as long as Bran and Will let him live*

"Damn. I need more paperclips. I'll be back"

*Wanders off*

It's been awhile since I've read any BxW fanfics, but I really like yours. It's been really promising, especially towards the end. Your writing is very good! I look forward to Bran and Will's happy ending soon!

Incredible! Can't wait for more :D

Enjoying the story so far, I think the guy who made the signs was Wayland Smith.

Hooray!

They're back!

Unfortunately my books are downstairs, and I'm way too lazy to go and find them in the disaster area that is my room anyway. so unfortunately no help will be forthcoming in the time scheme from me.

Much as I hate Simon, I rather hope I kept him alive for a while, if only so that Bran or Will can kill him himself. I would hate to have deprived them of the pleasure!

D: no! TT I hope there's a happy ending. But thank you for updating.

Hiyah Aniyu! Good chapter, haven't heard from you in a while! I sense a filler chapter, perhaps? I like the fluff though. It's cute.

It's been such a long time since the last update that I had to go back and reread the whole story. I still love it, by the way. I can't wait for Bran and Will to finally confess (whenever they actually decide to). I hope you update again soon!

hm. i just recently watched the Dark is Rising movie and then i had to go and re-read the books to refresh my memory on what happened. yeah...they kinda screwed the book over. some things were backwards and for some reason they were all american. anyway, i prefer the books and i like what you're doing with your fanfic. it's really good, but do me a favor...smack some sense into james. i mean really...

This is an awesome story. I didn't find it until this chapter, so I decided to read all of it before reviewing. I can't wait to read more! Oh! BTW: The DiR movie is going to be horrible. Have you seen the trailers?